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Post by jennaceeta25 on Aug 1, 2008 11:13:30 GMT -5
wonderful writing so far, Tab! Sorry you got rid of your other work! Don't you hate that!!!!!!!
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Post by mellie on Aug 1, 2008 23:19:10 GMT -5
Tabs, I love everything that you've added as of lately. You have a gift for words.
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Post by tabatha on Aug 2, 2008 1:50:35 GMT -5
awe, thanks ******************************************************** "When I lost my best friend, I sometimes thought that should of been me. She had so much to live for, and I felt like I was dead inside. Then I found some kind of spiritual happiness, then I met you. My mom found Damien again..." "What happened to her, was never your fault. We all go through periods in our life where things don't go our way. And we stumble. It's a journey." She smiled up at him. Then her breath hitched. She still had moments where she picked up on things. And now she knew. And was scared out of her mind. Apolo traced her jaw line, saw Majory inhale deeply. Pupils go wide. "Majory, I've had words planned, almost wrote them down. But they can't even begin to tell what I feel for you." He took out the small back box, with out a moments hesitation. Opened it up, and inside, the jewels winked. A diamond, hugged by two yellow gems. She bit her lip, and began to cry. "Majory, will you marry me?" "Of course I will, Apolo." Finally she could breathe again. And waited as he pulled the ring from the box, and slid it onto her finger, where it fit perfectly. Majory held it out to stare at it. Her hand shook. It was perfect. She laughed as she hugged him to her. And swore she felt and heard her friend's laughter in the breeze. ******************************************************** ah, that's it for this chapter. I'll be starting the final one soon.
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Post by jennaceeta25 on Aug 2, 2008 15:09:22 GMT -5
What can I say, Tabatha! I'm at a lost for words, really. Wonderful! What's going to happen next? btw, my story is on thread below yours.
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Post by mellie on Aug 2, 2008 23:48:04 GMT -5
Absolutely loved it.
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