Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Oct 8, 2007 11:01:12 GMT -5
Hey, Ally. I've decided to go ahead and start my DWTS fic and yes, you are in it and I mispelled the title. The title is 'Temptation Avenue', by the way. The plot is this: You and I are 2 NYC bachelorettes who moved to Los Angeles after our townhouse caught on fire. It starts out as we get ready to go to Dancing With The Stars when all of a sudden, someone that I'm crazy about shows up. What happens from this point is quite a shocker. I hope you like it.
Chapter 1: The 1st Encounter................
Ally had just got out of the shower when she went to check her answering machine & there were 2 messages on the answering machine: One from Mark Ballas, who wants to take me on a date after Dancing With The Stars and one from one of Ally's friends from Canada who wanted to ask her on a date. I was in the jacuzzi when Ally ran up to me.
"Hey, Art! you won't believe who just called us?" Ally said.
"Ally! Can't you see that I'm trying to relax? Anyway, who is it that just called us?" I replied.
"Well, excuse me, your highness! A friend of mine from Tornoto & a certain someone from Dancing With The Stars called for you." Ally said.
"Oh really? What did he want with me?" I said to Ally.
"Well, he wanted to take ya on a date after Dancing With The Stars. You should give him a chance, Artemis. He really likes you, plus I know that you've been secretly crushing on him for a while now. You should definitely get out more. Ever since Jeremy broke up with you, you haven't been the same. Who knows, you & Mark might hit off." Ally replied.
"Well, I guess I can give dating one more chance, but I can't guarantee that I'll end up dating him after this is over. Uh-oh, what if Apolo's at Dancing With The Stars? Oh man, I'll be in big trouble!" I said.
"Don't worry about Apolo, Artemis! He won't stand a chance once he sees Mark! You are so paranoid, Artemis! It's as if you were afraid that if Apolo caught you with Mark, he'd kill him. Girl, ya got me & I will not let anyone hurt you." Ally reassured me.
"OK, I totally trust you, Ally. Maybe going to watch Julianne in the competition will get my mind off of Apolo for a while." I replied.
"Atta girl Artemis. Besides, you might get to see Mark do his thing on the dance floor." Ally said.
As I was getting ready to go to Dancing With The Stars, there was a knock on the door. Ally went to answer the door & there stood Mark, with a bouquet of roses for me.
"Is Artemis here?" he asked Ally.
"Yeah, I'll go get her." Ally replied.
She ran in my room & I was about to put my makeup on.
"Artemis! You won't believe who's here!" Ally said excitedly.
"Who is it, Ally? Is it Julian?" Iasked her.
"No, Artemis! Mark's in our living room right now!" Ally responded.
""You've got to be kidding me! Tell him I'll be right out." I said.
5 minutes later, I come out in the most beautiful Chanel dress Mark has ever seen.
"Oh my god, she looks stunning! What designer made that heavenly dress she's wearing?" Mark replied.
"That's a Chanel dress." Ally replied.
"Well, she looks like a princess." Mark said to Ally.
"Oh my gosh, I'm blushing." I said.
"Well, you do look beautiful in that dress & by the way, these roses are for you." Mark said to me.
As soon as we left the beach house, there was a limo waiting for us & as soon as I got in the limo, there were bottles of champagne & 2 glasses & I felt like I was in heaven. Ally had a smile on her face too, because she knew that I was happy & she had tears coming down her eyes & that's when I knew my life was about to change for the better.
END OF CHAPTER 1
Chapter 1: The 1st Encounter................
Ally had just got out of the shower when she went to check her answering machine & there were 2 messages on the answering machine: One from Mark Ballas, who wants to take me on a date after Dancing With The Stars and one from one of Ally's friends from Canada who wanted to ask her on a date. I was in the jacuzzi when Ally ran up to me.
"Hey, Art! you won't believe who just called us?" Ally said.
"Ally! Can't you see that I'm trying to relax? Anyway, who is it that just called us?" I replied.
"Well, excuse me, your highness! A friend of mine from Tornoto & a certain someone from Dancing With The Stars called for you." Ally said.
"Oh really? What did he want with me?" I said to Ally.
"Well, he wanted to take ya on a date after Dancing With The Stars. You should give him a chance, Artemis. He really likes you, plus I know that you've been secretly crushing on him for a while now. You should definitely get out more. Ever since Jeremy broke up with you, you haven't been the same. Who knows, you & Mark might hit off." Ally replied.
"Well, I guess I can give dating one more chance, but I can't guarantee that I'll end up dating him after this is over. Uh-oh, what if Apolo's at Dancing With The Stars? Oh man, I'll be in big trouble!" I said.
"Don't worry about Apolo, Artemis! He won't stand a chance once he sees Mark! You are so paranoid, Artemis! It's as if you were afraid that if Apolo caught you with Mark, he'd kill him. Girl, ya got me & I will not let anyone hurt you." Ally reassured me.
"OK, I totally trust you, Ally. Maybe going to watch Julianne in the competition will get my mind off of Apolo for a while." I replied.
"Atta girl Artemis. Besides, you might get to see Mark do his thing on the dance floor." Ally said.
As I was getting ready to go to Dancing With The Stars, there was a knock on the door. Ally went to answer the door & there stood Mark, with a bouquet of roses for me.
"Is Artemis here?" he asked Ally.
"Yeah, I'll go get her." Ally replied.
She ran in my room & I was about to put my makeup on.
"Artemis! You won't believe who's here!" Ally said excitedly.
"Who is it, Ally? Is it Julian?" Iasked her.
"No, Artemis! Mark's in our living room right now!" Ally responded.
""You've got to be kidding me! Tell him I'll be right out." I said.
5 minutes later, I come out in the most beautiful Chanel dress Mark has ever seen.
"Oh my god, she looks stunning! What designer made that heavenly dress she's wearing?" Mark replied.
"That's a Chanel dress." Ally replied.
"Well, she looks like a princess." Mark said to Ally.
"Oh my gosh, I'm blushing." I said.
"Well, you do look beautiful in that dress & by the way, these roses are for you." Mark said to me.
As soon as we left the beach house, there was a limo waiting for us & as soon as I got in the limo, there were bottles of champagne & 2 glasses & I felt like I was in heaven. Ally had a smile on her face too, because she knew that I was happy & she had tears coming down her eyes & that's when I knew my life was about to change for the better.
END OF CHAPTER 1
I wonder who's dating Ally?
