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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 27, 2007 12:49:13 GMT -5
Ally, I've decided to go ahead and post this thread, which I will start the 1st chapter ASAP. By the way, this fic is dedicated to you, sis!
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Post by ally on Jun 27, 2007 12:52:10 GMT -5
awww thats so sweet of you!! but you dont have to dedicate it to me!! it was enough when you welcomed me when i first joined this forum ;D cant wait to read this tho hehe
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 28, 2007 12:17:33 GMT -5
Well, here ya go, ally! The 1st and part 1 of the 2nd chapter of my new fic! Hope ya like it!
Chapter 1: A Look Into the Past.....
Lurking in the shadows somewhere in the streets of New York stands a woman with the supernatural ability to manipulate her enemies, the unstoppable power to cause trouble without being seen or heard; she has deep sapphire eyes of seduction, a smoldering personality, lips as full as 2 ripe mangos in Hawaii, sex appeal that is deadly to those who dared to resist her charm and a kiss dangerous enough to put ANY unsuspecting man in a deep coma. That woman is me, Artemis Skylar Rose Young, vampire queen of New York City. I drink the blood of all of my victims, including 4 of the world's sexiest men, who ALL loved me for who I am. Apolo Anton Ohno is known as Seattle's cassanova of the 'Wicked West Coast'. When I'm with him, I always got what I want and he was the first one to fall for my vampiric charm. His archrival Phil Ritchie is one lethal force to reckon with. Anyone who messes w/ him doesn't survive! 1 man who DARED to test me was Davey Havok, who tried to kill me & almost succeeded. I never saw him again after X-Mas 2006. The day I was found unconcious was a day that ally, Rex and BOTH Apolo and Jeremy will never forget. It was a typical summer day in NYC and ally was planning her romantic cruise with her boyfriend Rex Goudie. Apolo and Jeremy were both w/me and I felt loved until Jeremy was caught cheating on me and Apolo got deathly sick and I thought my world was gonna end.
"If anyone has a problem with Artemis, speak now or bite your tongue." Apolo would always say.
"Well, at least ONE of us is defending her." Jeremy said.
"Jeremy! Do you even REALIZE that your friends had killed Artemis? Who knows what curse she'll bring upon us?" ally said, frantically.
Well, Phil and Davey both left me for better lives and started dating other girls, but Apolo stayed faithful, but I'm not so sure about Jeremy, though. The night I bit them both was truly a night to remember. Let's just say that they were exhausted by the time I finally settled down for the night. The next day, I caught Jeremy with my ex-best friend Storm Large (who was a former contestant of Rock Star: Supernova) and I was furious. I set his favorite jacket on fire, took Apolo's pocket knife and slit his denim jeans all to pieces, threw coffee on his favorite shirts and destroyed almost everything else he owned and he got so upset, he almost hung himself.
The night I was brutally attacked was the same night as Apolo and I were supposed to be married, but Jeremy's friends jumped us and 'killed' me and nearly killed Apolo. Let's just say that Apolo survived, but I didn't, but little did he know, my vampiric powers were just too strong for anyone to kill me with, so I rose up from the tomb that I was buried in and when Jeremy saw me, he turned deathly white.
"I thought you were dead, Artemis!?!?!?!?!?" Jeremy flipped out.
"No one can kill me, not even your foolish friends. If you want me back, then STOP cheating on me or I will place a curse on you so bad, you'll REGRET that you ever messed with me." I said as I headed toward where Apolo, Ally and Rex were at.
END of chapter 1
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Chapter 2: An Immortal Kiss Of Death.................
When they saw me walking, they got so terrified, they almost passed out.
"Artemis, you're alive?" Rex said.
"DUH! I am alive, Rex! No one can kill me! I am immortal, just like Jeremy and Apolo are now. Ally, I apologize for worrying you so much. It seems that Jeremy's friends were too stupid to think that they can torture me. Apolo, I sensed that you wanted our wedding night to go perfectly." I said to them.
"I'm just glad that you survived, Artemis!" Ally said.
"I knew that you wouldn't be put down that quickly. The first we should do is track down ALL of Jeremy's friends and teach them a lesson they'll NEVER forget!" Apolo said.
"That is a good idea." I said.
(To Be Continued........)
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Post by ally on Jun 28, 2007 19:45:43 GMT -5
ooooh!!! i like this story alot!! keep writing art! ;D its so interesting lol! one question... do you in real life consider yourself beautiful like the way you describe in the beginning of the first chapter?? or is that just for the story lol.. just curious... anyway i really like this.. so please continue ;D ;D thanx for putting rex and I in it.. and I love being rex's girlfriend  i wish it was like that in real life haha  |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 29, 2007 7:57:36 GMT -5
ally, the way I described myself in the story is kinda true in reality, except I'm not as deadly as I am in the fic.
and by the way, I WANTED to hook you and Rex up in the fic, because I had a dream about you both last night and I would definitely see you 2 dating in the near future.
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Post by ally on Jun 29, 2007 9:22:52 GMT -5
awww you really think so Art??? thats sweet of you! the reason why i asked about saying your beautiful in the fic ... i just wanted to know if you really feel that way about yourself cause thats kinda how do i put it?? like you know you are beautiful.. i would never be able to admit that about myself at all lol
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 29, 2007 9:34:20 GMT -5
Of course I feel that way! Beauty is only skin deep, but what a person truly is on the inside is truly remarkable and ally, you are beautiful on the outside and inside. You're a very sweet girl and I honestly think that you're the coolest person and tonight you and I will at long last talk on MSN.
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Post by ally on Jun 29, 2007 9:39:51 GMT -5
really ?? u think so?? hmm people never really thought that way about me.. thanx Art  oh and oh man! i have to work 2nite.. will u be on 2morrow nite lets say like 7 30 my time?? or will u be on at any point 2day ? |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 29, 2007 11:00:06 GMT -5
Sure, 7:30 your time, sounds good to me, sis.
I forgot to mention that I will soon have a job, but I do not know what it is yet, but I'm waiting for the dreaded job interview. Any advice I can use to help me through it?
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Post by ally on Jun 29, 2007 11:09:53 GMT -5
oh thats cool!! well just feel relaxed when you go for the interview and answer the questions in a polite manner.. dont say anything stupid haha i know you wouldnt but sometimes it slips out,... be calm and kind and be honest but dont say something like "no i cant do that" tell them that you are a hard worker .. because i think you are... that kinda stuff |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 29, 2007 11:27:45 GMT -5
thanks, ally!
I will use that advice by heart!
anyway, part 2 of chapter 2 will be posted today.
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Post by ally on Jun 29, 2007 11:29:39 GMT -5
hey np !! and sweet! cant wait to read it!! ;D ;D ;D i have to post a chapter of either of my stories soon.. i just thought of it... im goin to post my 4rth chapter of Once in a Lifetime for your contest! how come nobody has entered the contest yet??
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 29, 2007 11:47:58 GMT -5
I do not know, but you'll be the first person to enter the contest!
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Post by ally on Jun 29, 2007 22:11:57 GMT -5
haha but what if im the ONLY one that enters the contest?? hahahah |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 30, 2007 9:40:11 GMT -5
then, I guess you'd win automatically!
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