Post by ally on Jun 17, 2007 17:21:00 GMT -5
I have come up with chapter 3 if anyone is interested! rating still remains at PG 13... enjoy! ;D
Artemis went for a walk in the neighbourhood. It was beautiful; with the endless trees surrounding and the air smelling of the sweet aroma of summer flowers. Burlington was a beautiful place to be, especially when someone's best friend was snatched away from them. She continued to walk around and found herself at a convenience store. She needed energy so she entered the store and bought herself a nice energy drink; something about red bull always got her jumping up and down in any situation. Artemis then left the store and accidently bumped into a man who was about five foot seven and wearing a white t-shirt and blue jeans. She has seen this guy somewhere.
"OMG! Rex???" Artemis exclaimed accidentily.
"Yeah!" He said. "How you doin'?"
"Oh wow!" She said shaking his hand vigourously. "I'm great thanks! And you?"
"Alright I guess," Rex answered. "I'm just on a mission to find a certain kidnapper. Have you heard about that? It was right in this city!"
"Oh,"Artemis paused for a second. "Uh--- yeah that was my friend Ally who got abducted. And i know who the guy is too. I just don't know what to do,"
"Oh!"Rex got excited. "Well you're the only one so far who actually knows who he is! Do you want to help me track him down?"
"Sure!"Artemis got excited as well. She wanted her best friend back. "I also have Jeremy Koz with me as well! The three of us can track him down and save Ally!"
"Jeremy??" Rex's face went to a shocked expression. "You're kidding! Him and I go way back on Canadian Idol! Ok, back on topic.. Do you know this guy's name?"
"Uh," She tried to get out the words. She had to explain it sooner or later.
"Come on! You have to let me have a drink!" Apolo growled at me. We were both sitting down in his living room.
"No," I protested.
"I knew you wouldn't behave!" He growled more and grabbed me. I screeched. His grip was so strong; I couldn't escape.
"LET ME GO!!" I cried. He wouldn't let go. He then lowered his head towards my neck. "NO!! YOUR NOT BITING ME AGAIN!!" But he wouldn't listen. Before I knew it, his fangs once again sank in. It was the most painful thing I've ever felt.This time he was biting harder. He finally released me; i spotted some blood streaming down from his sharp teeth. I wanted to cry. He scared the he!! out of me. The evil glare in his hazel eyes gave me shivers.
"You're a dead girl" He whispered into my ear, which gave me more chills. The tone of his voice was so eerie. "Just wait until you turn into a vampire like I am. You're gonna regret saying no to me!"
He grabbed me and took me to one of the guest rooms. My neck was still bleeding and throbbing. He pushed me onto the bed and said, " Stay in here for a while! This will teach you to listen to me! And your getting no food tonight so just forget it! Next time you disagree with me, you will wish you were never born!"And he shut the door and locked it. I Had tears in my eyes. I was starving and he has not fed me all day. He was the devil in disguise. I wished I was dead, without becoming the undead. He was the scariest guy I've ever encountered. I was in he!!. I kept banging at the door and shouting for him to let me out, but there was no use. He wouldn't let me out even if he wanted to. He was pure evil. After alittle while, I lay on the bed with tears still streaming down my cheeks. I have never cried that long. I was so hungry and thirsty that i drank my tears, it still didn't help. All of a sudden i hear the door open and Apolo is holding a glass with a red liquid in it.
" Here," he glared at me. "This is all your getting. Drink it! If you don't drink this in ten minutes, I will torture you myself."
He handed it to me. I took is and sniffed at it. I pulled away. It smelt like iron. He then locked me in again. I tried to drink it but i couldn't, but after a while, I took a sip and looked at the clock. I had five minutes left. It tasted so bad I made a face. It was blood. In the next five minutes I kept taking sip after sip, trying to let it slide down my throat. I almost puked a couple of times. After the five minutes, Apolo opened the door.
"Are you done?" he glared at me and beared his fangs.
Uh oh! this is getting very scary lol.. i made apolo extra evil! i wonder what will happen next!
Artemis went for a walk in the neighbourhood. It was beautiful; with the endless trees surrounding and the air smelling of the sweet aroma of summer flowers. Burlington was a beautiful place to be, especially when someone's best friend was snatched away from them. She continued to walk around and found herself at a convenience store. She needed energy so she entered the store and bought herself a nice energy drink; something about red bull always got her jumping up and down in any situation. Artemis then left the store and accidently bumped into a man who was about five foot seven and wearing a white t-shirt and blue jeans. She has seen this guy somewhere.
"OMG! Rex???" Artemis exclaimed accidentily.
"Yeah!" He said. "How you doin'?"
"Oh wow!" She said shaking his hand vigourously. "I'm great thanks! And you?"
"Alright I guess," Rex answered. "I'm just on a mission to find a certain kidnapper. Have you heard about that? It was right in this city!"
"Oh,"Artemis paused for a second. "Uh--- yeah that was my friend Ally who got abducted. And i know who the guy is too. I just don't know what to do,"
"Oh!"Rex got excited. "Well you're the only one so far who actually knows who he is! Do you want to help me track him down?"
"Sure!"Artemis got excited as well. She wanted her best friend back. "I also have Jeremy Koz with me as well! The three of us can track him down and save Ally!"
"Jeremy??" Rex's face went to a shocked expression. "You're kidding! Him and I go way back on Canadian Idol! Ok, back on topic.. Do you know this guy's name?"
"Uh," She tried to get out the words. She had to explain it sooner or later.
"Come on! You have to let me have a drink!" Apolo growled at me. We were both sitting down in his living room.
"No," I protested.
"I knew you wouldn't behave!" He growled more and grabbed me. I screeched. His grip was so strong; I couldn't escape.
"LET ME GO!!" I cried. He wouldn't let go. He then lowered his head towards my neck. "NO!! YOUR NOT BITING ME AGAIN!!" But he wouldn't listen. Before I knew it, his fangs once again sank in. It was the most painful thing I've ever felt.This time he was biting harder. He finally released me; i spotted some blood streaming down from his sharp teeth. I wanted to cry. He scared the he!! out of me. The evil glare in his hazel eyes gave me shivers.
"You're a dead girl" He whispered into my ear, which gave me more chills. The tone of his voice was so eerie. "Just wait until you turn into a vampire like I am. You're gonna regret saying no to me!"
He grabbed me and took me to one of the guest rooms. My neck was still bleeding and throbbing. He pushed me onto the bed and said, " Stay in here for a while! This will teach you to listen to me! And your getting no food tonight so just forget it! Next time you disagree with me, you will wish you were never born!"And he shut the door and locked it. I Had tears in my eyes. I was starving and he has not fed me all day. He was the devil in disguise. I wished I was dead, without becoming the undead. He was the scariest guy I've ever encountered. I was in he!!. I kept banging at the door and shouting for him to let me out, but there was no use. He wouldn't let me out even if he wanted to. He was pure evil. After alittle while, I lay on the bed with tears still streaming down my cheeks. I have never cried that long. I was so hungry and thirsty that i drank my tears, it still didn't help. All of a sudden i hear the door open and Apolo is holding a glass with a red liquid in it.
" Here," he glared at me. "This is all your getting. Drink it! If you don't drink this in ten minutes, I will torture you myself."
He handed it to me. I took is and sniffed at it. I pulled away. It smelt like iron. He then locked me in again. I tried to drink it but i couldn't, but after a while, I took a sip and looked at the clock. I had five minutes left. It tasted so bad I made a face. It was blood. In the next five minutes I kept taking sip after sip, trying to let it slide down my throat. I almost puked a couple of times. After the five minutes, Apolo opened the door.
"Are you done?" he glared at me and beared his fangs.
Uh oh! this is getting very scary lol.. i made apolo extra evil! i wonder what will happen next!
Apolo's being really bad. I can't wait for the next one. I really like you stories. They're the best, really.