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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 7, 2007 11:54:54 GMT -5
Ladies, I have written a poem about Apolo MONTHS ago and I thought I'd share it with you.............. The Eternal Star: An Ode To Apolo Anton Ohno Written By: Artemis Skylar Rose Young In a complex yet dangerous world, one man stands his ground as a fierce warrior that is not afraid to let loose on the dance floor. With eyes so sensual yet sparkles like millions of diamonds in the sky, an untamed yet adventurous spirit, the strength of a deadly tiger, skin as exotic as mocha done just right, he is a vision of hotness that haunts my very being. Through every inch of drama, I would always put myself in his point of view and how he would handle it. When I first saw him while he was competing in the 2006 Olympics, my heart froze and I couldn’t breathe, for he took my breath away completely and right then I knew I was in the presence of a true rebellious angel. "Dancing With The Stars" changed my life for the better, because for once, I can actually let go of every fear that I had in the past. My love for him burns like a passionate flame that will burn for eternity and beyond and will never burn out. I could feel his passionate spirit when I feel sexy and confident and there is nothing in this cold and twisted world that could stop me, not even my friends in Harmony House can tell me that I can't gush over him. When I go to sleep at night, I would hear his voice telling me how much he loves me and sometimes when I'm fast asleep dreaming of him, I would feel him kissing me on the cheek. Everytime I see him on TV, my heart would sink to my stomach and that is why he is my Eternal Star. What do you think, girls? ?
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Post by ally on Jun 7, 2007 14:25:49 GMT -5
OMG!!! I LOVED IT!!! OH WOW U MADE APOLO SOUND SO DREAMY AS HE IS! GOOD JOB!!! KEEP WRITIN' GIRL! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by mellie on Jun 7, 2007 21:50:36 GMT -5
Lovely poem Artemis. ;D
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 8, 2007 8:11:59 GMT -5
thank you so much.
I'm thinking of doing another Apolo poem sometime soon.
ANY SUGGESTIONS?
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Post by ally on Jun 8, 2007 9:47:16 GMT -5
np!!!!!! ;D ur gonna write another one? sweet!!! ;D i think in this one u should realllyyy describe apolo like hes a god or something... i dunno lmao u kinda did something like that with this poem
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 8, 2007 11:32:39 GMT -5
OK, ally. I'll put u in my next poem.
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Post by ally on Jun 8, 2007 12:39:20 GMT -5
awww thanx art!! and i promise you that you will be in my story alot more
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