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Post by luvtheaccent on Jun 3, 2007 16:04:18 GMT -5
i like it
but i wasn't sure if ppl would
cos he's not exactly in it
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Post by ally on Jun 3, 2007 16:17:46 GMT -5
well thats ok cause hes mentioned and the story is hilarious... he doesnt have to be in it every second for the story to be good lol ;D ;D
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Post by luvtheaccent on Jun 3, 2007 16:27:43 GMT -5
haha
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Post by ally on Jun 3, 2007 16:43:46 GMT -5
lol i cant wait to find out wat will happen wen she finally figures out who he is now that i can see there being a funny outcome! lol  |
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Post by luvtheaccent on Jun 3, 2007 16:46:05 GMT -5
see.. i really like funny stuff
now akward for the reader
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Post by ally on Jun 3, 2007 16:53:50 GMT -5
exactly!! the funny stuff makes the story! my 3rd chapter will have some funny stuff in it lol
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Post by luvtheaccent on Jun 3, 2007 17:14:52 GMT -5
haha
alright
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Post by ally on Jun 3, 2007 18:06:37 GMT -5
lol i just have to start writing it thats all lol
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Post by luvtheaccent on Jun 3, 2007 18:17:59 GMT -5
haha me too
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Post by *^padfoot^* on Jun 3, 2007 18:38:47 GMT -5
Geesh...that was hilarious...I find myself ramblin on sometimes too...neat job...down to earth feel good!....I couldn't stop laughing...the drooling part?...:splat:...he he
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Post by ally on Jun 3, 2007 20:10:05 GMT -5
yeah that was too funny lol
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Post by luvtheaccent on Jun 3, 2007 22:38:08 GMT -5
haha it's something i'd do
i thought that making it realisic helps the audience get into it
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Post by ally on Jun 3, 2007 22:44:21 GMT -5
that is very true cause u dont want it to be completelly unrealistic lol
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Post by luvtheaccent on Jun 3, 2007 22:47:10 GMT -5
yeah...
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Post by ally on Jun 3, 2007 22:53:33 GMT -5
lol thanx 4 making it realistic  |
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