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Post by ally on Jun 6, 2007 11:03:44 GMT -5
Thanx for checking mine out Art!! ill be posting more soon as soon as i can get into it more.. and please keep writing cause ur doin a fantastic job!! ;D
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 6, 2007 13:01:50 GMT -5
I'm gonna start chapter 4 soon!
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Post by ally on Jun 6, 2007 13:58:13 GMT -5
sweet!! ill help u if we r both online at the same time lol  |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 11, 2007 12:45:42 GMT -5
Ok, ally.
Here's what I got for chapter 4.....
Chapter 4: The Blood War Of Epic Proportions...........
A few weeks later, I was with Julianne and Ally on a girls day out when all of a sudden, Rex and Jeremy came out of nowhere and scared the living daylights out of me.
"Well, what do we have here, Rex? The immortal ice princess of New York, Artemis. What's been going on you, Artemis?" Jeremy asked.
"Not much. Just hanging around here in New York with Apolo and the rest of my posse. How's things in Canada?" I asked.
"Well, Canadian Idol's back in full swing and I've been miserable without you. I shouldn't have left you for your cousin Candice Michelle when I could've had it all with you." Jeremy said as he gently kissed me on the cheek.
"I see that ally's with you. I've looked everywhere for you, Ally. Where have you been all this time?" Rex said to Ally.
"Well, I've been with Artemis the whole time. Did you know that Artemis and Apolo are now enagaged?" Ally asked.
"Oh lord, I'm too late then. I have failed as a lover to have seen this coming. Just wait until I see Apolo. I'm gonna kill him for stealing you away from me." Jeremy said in envy.
"Oh, ally. Artemis looks a bit pale. Is she sick?" Rex asked ally.
"No, she's just dehyrdated, that's all. Uh-oh, Apolo's coming. Julianne, take Artemis with you to Forever 21. I'll meet you girls there." Ally said.
"What is the meaning of this? Jeremy Koz! I should've known that you and that no good snake in the grass Rex would even have the nerve to show up here. Why couldn't you just stay away?" Apolo said as his fangs gleamed in the sunlight.
"Well, it seems that your beloved Artemis was once my soulmate and I still want her back and I WILL get her back eventually, you'll see. Oh and by the way, Ally's been flirting around with Rex behind your back." Jeremy said.
"Well, is that so? I thought I told her that I forbid this from happening! It looks like I'll have to do this the hard way, won't I?" Apolo snapped as he lunged toward Ally and bit her really really hard.
(UH-OH, ALLY! You're in for it.)
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Post by ally on Jun 11, 2007 12:54:08 GMT -5
AHHH!!!!!!!!!! OMG IM SCARED!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahh he bit me!! oh boy this is getting really good! and i thank you for putting Rex in this fic! he really deserves it! ahh man apolo can be scary especially as a vampire!! good job!! ;D
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 11, 2007 13:08:48 GMT -5
Ok, ally. Here's what I got for chapter 4..... Chapter 4: The Blood War Of Epic Proportions........... A few weeks later, I was with Julianne and Ally on a girls day out when all of a sudden, Rex and Jeremy came out of nowhere and scared the living daylights out of me. "Well, what do we have here, Rex? The immortal ice princess of New York, Artemis. What's been going on you, Artemis?" Jeremy asked. "Not much. Just hanging around here in New York with Apolo and the rest of my posse. How's things in Canada?" I asked. "Well, Canadian Idol's back in full swing and I've been miserable without you. I shouldn't have left you for your cousin Candice Michelle when I could've had it all with you." Jeremy said as he gently kissed me on the cheek. "I see that ally's with you. I've looked everywhere for you, Ally. Where have you been all this time?" Rex said to Ally. "Well, I've been with Artemis the whole time. Did you know that Artemis and Apolo are now enagaged?" Ally asked. "Oh lord, I'm too late then. I have failed as a lover to have seen this coming. Just wait until I see Apolo. I'm gonna kill him for stealing you away from me." Jeremy said in envy. "Oh, ally. Artemis looks a bit pale. Is she sick?" Rex asked ally. "No, she's just dehyrdated, that's all. Uh-oh, Apolo's coming. Julianne, take Artemis with you to Forever 21. I'll meet you girls there." Ally said. "What is the meaning of this? Jeremy Koz! I should've known that you and that no good snake in the grass Rex would even have the nerve to show up here. Why couldn't you just stay away?" Apolo said as his fangs gleamed in the sunlight. "Well, it seems that your beloved Artemis was once my soulmate and I still want her back and I WILL get her back eventually, you'll see. Oh and by the way, Ally's been flirting around with Rex behind your back." Jeremy said. "Well, is that so? I thought I told her that I forbid this from happening! It looks like I'll have to do this the hard way, won't I?" Apolo snapped as he lunged toward Ally and bit her really really hard. (UH-OH, ALLY! You're in for it.) "What was that for, Apolo?" Ally said in a panic. "That was for not heeding my warning about Rex. You deserved this fate more than others. If I were you, I'd stay away from Rex. He's nothing but trouble. As for you, Jeremy, Artemis has left you for a d**n good reason. She loves me now and we are about to tie the knot tommorrow night and you better stay as far away from Artemis as possible." Apolo said with his eyes blood red. Just then, Julianne and I got back from our shopping trip and I saw Ally, on her knees and bleeding from her neck. "APOLO! WHAT DID YOU DO TO ALLY?  " I asked. "She didn't listen to me when I told her NOT to be flirting around with Rex. I sensed that you and Jeremy were once bf/gf. Is it true?" Apolo said with an evil gleam in his eyes. "Yes, but he started abusing me, Apolo and I had to leave him. He was not supposed to be around me, according to the judge's ruling, but late last night, he violated that restraining order and literally harassed me!" I said. "THAT'S NOT TRUE! APOLO WAS THE ONE THAT HARASSED YOU, ARTEMIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I TOLD YOU TIME AND AGAIN THAT I WOULDN'T LAY A HAND ON YOU AND FOR THAT, I HAVE NO CHOICE TO BUT TO KILL YOU!" Jeremy snapped as his demonic/vampiric side was revealed. "Oh......snap! Now, I've gone and done it." I said to myself. Apolo and Jeremy starting fighting. Fighting words were flying and lot of punches were thrown and Apolo was almost stabbed to death by Jeremy and let's just say that BOTH of them were bleeding by the time they were through. "Oh sweet jesus, Jeremy! You know better than to try to kill Apolo. He's way too strong, but you were fierce. Ally, I should've told you a long time ago. While you were in Toronto and I told you that a snake bit you. I lied. I was the one that bit you and Apolo had messed up everything and now, I'll have to kill him." Rex said. "I don't think so, Rex! NO ONE touches Apolo but me and Julianne! You better back off you good for nothing son of a b****!" I snapped as my fangs came out. I lunged at him, but ally jumped right in front of Rex, thus saving his life. "Ally, what were you thinking?" I asked. (there ya go, Ally. what do you think?) |
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Post by ally on Jun 11, 2007 13:13:19 GMT -5
omg wow!! this is so intense!!! i cant believe rex bit me! wow lol haha he said a snake bit me thats too funny i think you have inspired me to write my own vampire fic!! im gonna make apolo the vampire and rex the hero who saves me from him or tries to anyway! thanx 4 the idea and keep writing cause this is awesome!! ;D ;D |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 11, 2007 13:21:58 GMT -5
ally! OMG, I MUST be in that fic, sis, since I put u in this one.
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Post by ally on Jun 11, 2007 13:27:01 GMT -5
alrite! i was thinking that! you will be my best friend who is hanging out with me throughout the whole thing.. and im gonna make apolo EXTRA scary!! hes gonna be so evil!
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 11, 2007 13:38:48 GMT -5
WHOA.... Who's his love interest in ur fic? |
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Post by ally on Jun 11, 2007 13:45:03 GMT -5
well its gonna be me... hope ur not jealous.  LOL! just kidding... but hes gonna come after me though and hes gonna be very evil and cruel.. i have to warn people that it will be PG13 and i will have some sexy moments in the story too!  |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 12, 2007 7:17:33 GMT -5
ally, how much in your fic AM I in? Am I the enemy or am I one of his many lover girls?
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Post by ally on Jun 12, 2007 10:38:03 GMT -5
your going to be my best friend... and yes he will go after you too lol hes coming after both of us.. and if you want, jeremy can be in it too  |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 12, 2007 11:58:05 GMT -5
OK. I'm gonna let you help me with this next part of chapter 4.
Can't wait to see what you did with it.
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Post by ally on Jun 12, 2007 12:13:23 GMT -5
ok sounds good!! well i havnt written my story yet but i will soon.. im kinda procrastinating haha! |
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