Post by fifi4ever on Aug 25, 2006 17:44:33 GMT -5
Here is my deep poem...leave like replies 
tis anygood?
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Story of Apolo
Twas Apolo born May twenty secound around ninety eighty two
With a mother that left Apolo at one and dad didn't know what to do
Swimming and choir Apolo started out
But then he got tired of it and started to pout,
So Apolo started inline oh so much fun
Hanging with friends, eating, racing, till the day was done,
Soon 1994 Olympics came,
He saw short track and he knew, that was his game
He started at 13 oh how good it was! Oh it must!
When he got his short track blades at Christmas
He started off around his town, then, a state or two
He was getting better, that was true,
Then came a coach from New York to help Apolo out,
So the coach talked to his dad and said he would make sure Apolo would go to train no doubt
Dad liked this idea, Apolo did not.
He wanted to be with his friends, cause he thought that idea was hott!
Dad said he was going no matter what
It would keep Apolo out of trouble, so he ignored every but
You see Apolo had friends, some not so good,
Some in gangs, way older than him; In the hood.
So Dad took Apolo to the Airport so Apolo could go
When his dad left, he called his friend on a payphone to pick him up, cause his answer was still, NO
His friend came by and he stayed at his home,
Apolo would go to friend's house to friend's house and roam
Two weeks later Yuki got a call
From Apolo's new coach saying he didn't show up at all
So Yuki, so worried, so mad
He tried everyone of Apolo's friends house, he needed to see him, bad
Finaly he found him, at last,
Yuki said Apolo.yep that's it
Their stood a quiet Apolo standing, did not sit,
Come home when your ready. Then Yuki left and went back,
Apolo stayed their still even though it made him sad for what he did, a big sad attack,
So Yuki called his mom's sister to come sort this thing out,
So she came, talked to Apolo, and brought him back without a pout,
This time Dad went with Apolo to Lake Placid, Apolo still hated this he did,
So being his stubborn self he skipped 5 mile runs for pizza, just a snack,
But when those fat body tests came back,
Apolo was highest this gave hiim unrest,
So he went to his coach and said, I don't want to be the slowest, I don't want to be the fastest, I want to be the BEST!
So he did winning world and US championships and all
Everyone thought he would go to Nagano, be his call,
Apolo still stuborn took a break before,
Mest up on the trials, got last, time to close that door,
Apolo was devestated, he didn't want to do short track no more,
So Yuki took him to a cabin in Seattle no talking, electronics, just food his cat, and him
He had to think was short track bright in his life, or dim.
Then he decided yes its what he was ment to do
So he started practicing for Salt Lake, through and through,
So he did make the trials! He even roke the world record!
The opeining ceremony, oh what a thrill
Then came Apolo's race with many a shreek and shrill
He was pumped, ready to win,
He was in the Legaue! Oh what a sin!
Someone fell along with Apolo and 1 more,
Coliding into the wall full speed! Oh the pain he bore!
Cut on his leg severe and such
Ohno! He couldn't get up much!
So then he crawled with all his strength he had to ace,
He had done it And got 2nd place!
The next medal he won was a gold,
For the Korean guy was tracking I thinka rule so bold
Apolo won silver & gold that Olympics, he had a blast,
And all those horrible memories were in his past,
When it was done he went on shows,
Like Rosie O Donnel, TRL, and Jay Leno,
On Jay Leno he cut himself shaving, backstage,
When it was time to come out Jay asked cut yourself shaving? Apolo was embarrassed gals were in the audience laughing at this,
He just laughed along, said yep, talked and went down to talk show buiseyness
On Rosie O Donnel she thought he was the cutest thing in a motherly way,
At the end of the show she gave him a car, his reply? NO WAY!
Next show was TRL, with Carson and his mike,
Apolo and him talked about stuff, and whats it like,
Carson stopped and asked if he could breakdance
Apolo said yeah when I was little, Carson told him to do it now, his chance,
The music started, he kicked back,
Did a spin or two and that was that,
That year he wrote an autobiography on him, yes a book,
And told kids, teens, and adults to take a look,
Later on Korea had a grudge
It most definetly didn't budge
They loathed apolo, made fun of him, cause he made one of their best loose that skate race,
When Apolo came out of the plane for WC he got shot but when they looked at the face
It wasn't him, apolo wasn't safe
So he had ten body guards all the time, widddde awake
Four more years did pass,
Now move mature, older, faster, top of his class.
He made the team easily,
But before that their were Olympic previews you MUST see,
One was a flipsyde video, Apolo and others in the spotlight,
Brought attention, love, delight,
Next was :In their own words
With Apolo, Michelle, and stuff telling us what it's all about
Next one was America's Best causing me to scream and SHOUT!
TorinoOh! The thrills it brought him,
1500 m a trip up, didn't win
then came the 1000 m! Apolo got a bronze with it!
People asked if he were dissapointed cause he was a hit!
Apolo said nawh he was hapy indeed
Just glad he was here, willing to suceed
500m came he won it all, gold, the perfect race,
I screamed, he screamed, You shoulda seen his face!
After closing ceremony got on his plane, over the snow,
And went on Ellen and the Jay Leno talk show
On jay leno he told he was haunted by a ghostHe thought that was annoying the MOST!
On Ellen she wanted to shave his soulpatch
He said no, so she put one on, HEY! THEY MATCH!
KCA came and Apolo was on
Oh being there so much fun!
He went to D.C. supporting math moves you.com
He went around capital hill giving high fives while kids see how fast he has gone
You see you may think I think he is just a pretty face
If you just think that, that's a disgrace
Now you know how much he has been through
How much I admire,
There is more to the story but my hand a tire
So next time pick up a book about him
You will learn about himYOU WIN!
He has had struggles
And trouble
On the doulbe
He still trys not this fightm
Tender and loving with all his might!
From this what's not to buy?
You should be like me, right now, going
WHAT A GUY!
And the journey continues to this day
Look out world he is on his way!
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i thought i did a good job sorry for all the spelling mistakes. did you guys like it ? 
tis anygood?****************************************************
Story of Apolo
Twas Apolo born May twenty secound around ninety eighty two
With a mother that left Apolo at one and dad didn't know what to do
Swimming and choir Apolo started out
But then he got tired of it and started to pout,
So Apolo started inline oh so much fun
Hanging with friends, eating, racing, till the day was done,
Soon 1994 Olympics came,
He saw short track and he knew, that was his game
He started at 13 oh how good it was! Oh it must!
When he got his short track blades at Christmas
He started off around his town, then, a state or two
He was getting better, that was true,
Then came a coach from New York to help Apolo out,
So the coach talked to his dad and said he would make sure Apolo would go to train no doubt
Dad liked this idea, Apolo did not.
He wanted to be with his friends, cause he thought that idea was hott!
Dad said he was going no matter what
It would keep Apolo out of trouble, so he ignored every but
You see Apolo had friends, some not so good,
Some in gangs, way older than him; In the hood.
So Dad took Apolo to the Airport so Apolo could go
When his dad left, he called his friend on a payphone to pick him up, cause his answer was still, NO
His friend came by and he stayed at his home,
Apolo would go to friend's house to friend's house and roam
Two weeks later Yuki got a call
From Apolo's new coach saying he didn't show up at all
So Yuki, so worried, so mad
He tried everyone of Apolo's friends house, he needed to see him, bad
Finaly he found him, at last,
Yuki said Apolo.yep that's it
Their stood a quiet Apolo standing, did not sit,
Come home when your ready. Then Yuki left and went back,
Apolo stayed their still even though it made him sad for what he did, a big sad attack,
So Yuki called his mom's sister to come sort this thing out,
So she came, talked to Apolo, and brought him back without a pout,
This time Dad went with Apolo to Lake Placid, Apolo still hated this he did,
So being his stubborn self he skipped 5 mile runs for pizza, just a snack,
But when those fat body tests came back,
Apolo was highest this gave hiim unrest,
So he went to his coach and said, I don't want to be the slowest, I don't want to be the fastest, I want to be the BEST!
So he did winning world and US championships and all
Everyone thought he would go to Nagano, be his call,
Apolo still stuborn took a break before,
Mest up on the trials, got last, time to close that door,
Apolo was devestated, he didn't want to do short track no more,
So Yuki took him to a cabin in Seattle no talking, electronics, just food his cat, and him
He had to think was short track bright in his life, or dim.
Then he decided yes its what he was ment to do
So he started practicing for Salt Lake, through and through,
So he did make the trials! He even roke the world record!
The opeining ceremony, oh what a thrill
Then came Apolo's race with many a shreek and shrill
He was pumped, ready to win,
He was in the Legaue! Oh what a sin!
Someone fell along with Apolo and 1 more,
Coliding into the wall full speed! Oh the pain he bore!
Cut on his leg severe and such
Ohno! He couldn't get up much!
So then he crawled with all his strength he had to ace,
He had done it And got 2nd place!
The next medal he won was a gold,
For the Korean guy was tracking I thinka rule so bold
Apolo won silver & gold that Olympics, he had a blast,
And all those horrible memories were in his past,
When it was done he went on shows,
Like Rosie O Donnel, TRL, and Jay Leno,
On Jay Leno he cut himself shaving, backstage,
When it was time to come out Jay asked cut yourself shaving? Apolo was embarrassed gals were in the audience laughing at this,
He just laughed along, said yep, talked and went down to talk show buiseyness
On Rosie O Donnel she thought he was the cutest thing in a motherly way,
At the end of the show she gave him a car, his reply? NO WAY!
Next show was TRL, with Carson and his mike,
Apolo and him talked about stuff, and whats it like,
Carson stopped and asked if he could breakdance
Apolo said yeah when I was little, Carson told him to do it now, his chance,
The music started, he kicked back,
Did a spin or two and that was that,
That year he wrote an autobiography on him, yes a book,
And told kids, teens, and adults to take a look,
Later on Korea had a grudge
It most definetly didn't budge
They loathed apolo, made fun of him, cause he made one of their best loose that skate race,
When Apolo came out of the plane for WC he got shot but when they looked at the face
It wasn't him, apolo wasn't safe
So he had ten body guards all the time, widddde awake
Four more years did pass,
Now move mature, older, faster, top of his class.
He made the team easily,
But before that their were Olympic previews you MUST see,
One was a flipsyde video, Apolo and others in the spotlight,
Brought attention, love, delight,
Next was :In their own words
With Apolo, Michelle, and stuff telling us what it's all about
Next one was America's Best causing me to scream and SHOUT!
TorinoOh! The thrills it brought him,
1500 m a trip up, didn't win
then came the 1000 m! Apolo got a bronze with it!
People asked if he were dissapointed cause he was a hit!
Apolo said nawh he was hapy indeed
Just glad he was here, willing to suceed
500m came he won it all, gold, the perfect race,
I screamed, he screamed, You shoulda seen his face!
After closing ceremony got on his plane, over the snow,
And went on Ellen and the Jay Leno talk show
On jay leno he told he was haunted by a ghostHe thought that was annoying the MOST!
On Ellen she wanted to shave his soulpatch
He said no, so she put one on, HEY! THEY MATCH!
KCA came and Apolo was on
Oh being there so much fun!
He went to D.C. supporting math moves you.com
He went around capital hill giving high fives while kids see how fast he has gone
You see you may think I think he is just a pretty face
If you just think that, that's a disgrace
Now you know how much he has been through
How much I admire,
There is more to the story but my hand a tire
So next time pick up a book about him
You will learn about himYOU WIN!
He has had struggles
And trouble
On the doulbe
He still trys not this fightm
Tender and loving with all his might!
From this what's not to buy?
You should be like me, right now, going
WHAT A GUY!
And the journey continues to this day
Look out world he is on his way!
****************************************************
i thought i did a good job sorry for all the spelling mistakes.
did you guys like it ? 
