Post by *^padfoot^* on Apr 23, 2006 23:38:21 GMT -5
I didn't like how it was going, but you be the judges! 
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Chapter 11
Shani had taken some awareness classes in high school ‘and stuff like “knowing you” and “keep it I won’t be needing it anymore” mean literal suicide or you’ll never see them which technically seem to mean the same, but really aren’t’ he tried to make sense out of everything.
“Apolo!”
“What?” He’s unavailable” Rusty pointed into Apolo’s room.
He was in a dead lip lock with Allison.
‘I just want her out of my mind’, he told himself. ‘After last night things look shady and I don’t think they won’t be the same they aren’t going to be able to be fixed’
“She’s leaving for good. I know it, where I don’t know”
“Shani, what are you talking about?” Rusty tried to make sense out of what Shani was trying to say.
“His actual girl. The one he’s trying to forget”
“Oh, man really? What do we do?”
Rusty did the first thing that came to his mind he knocked on the door, interrupting the two’s mood “Hey Apolo I need to talk to you man, it’s a matter some urgency”
“Wait here I’ll be right back” she just nodded and smiled. “What? What’s wrong?” he was worried.
They explained the ordeal.
“What?! I didn’t want her to leave”
“Well technically that’s my conclusion” Shani added.
“I need to go, tell Allison something came up”
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“You told me to never run away from a problem and all that crap, but your doing the same thing. Hypocrisy sis that’s what it is called” Jacqueline’s sister Maria told her.
“I’m sorry to disappoint you, but I just can’t take all of this. Take care and you know that I love you”
“I know. Everything is in your car. I’ll hear from you” silent tears started to form in her eyes.
“Please don’t”
Apolo was driving as fast as he could to get there.
“I can’t let her leave. I love her. I just can’t”
“Remember out plan sis. I just left and I didn’t say where”
“Okay, but please think…”
“I did there’s nothing more to think about”
“Yes, there is are you sure you want to leave me like this?” Apolo came from behind. “You’re being a bit cold aren’t you?
“No I don’t think so. For once I’m thinking about my self. I’m sick and tired of all this. I don’t want to marry a man I don’t love and I don’t want a dysfunctional relationship with a man that I do love but doesn’t feel the same for me”, she finished breathlessly.
“What? No Jacqueline” he came closer to her and whispered, “I’ve always loved you”
“Oh Apolo, I love you too” she grabbed his face and kissed him. Time seemed to have stopped.
“What’s this?” it was her father. “Who the hell is this moron with the long hair only girls have long hair”
‘Moron with long hair, only girls have long hair? Talk about offensive’ Apolo thought.
Things started to look bad.
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What do you think? I know i have a small reading audience! ;D, but you guys rock thanks for the feedback and I will try hard not to disappoint you!
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Chapter 11
Shani had taken some awareness classes in high school ‘and stuff like “knowing you” and “keep it I won’t be needing it anymore” mean literal suicide or you’ll never see them which technically seem to mean the same, but really aren’t’ he tried to make sense out of everything.
“Apolo!”
“What?” He’s unavailable” Rusty pointed into Apolo’s room.
He was in a dead lip lock with Allison.
‘I just want her out of my mind’, he told himself. ‘After last night things look shady and I don’t think they won’t be the same they aren’t going to be able to be fixed’
“She’s leaving for good. I know it, where I don’t know”
“Shani, what are you talking about?” Rusty tried to make sense out of what Shani was trying to say.
“His actual girl. The one he’s trying to forget”
“Oh, man really? What do we do?”
Rusty did the first thing that came to his mind he knocked on the door, interrupting the two’s mood “Hey Apolo I need to talk to you man, it’s a matter some urgency”
“Wait here I’ll be right back” she just nodded and smiled. “What? What’s wrong?” he was worried.
They explained the ordeal.
“What?! I didn’t want her to leave”
“Well technically that’s my conclusion” Shani added.
“I need to go, tell Allison something came up”
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“You told me to never run away from a problem and all that crap, but your doing the same thing. Hypocrisy sis that’s what it is called” Jacqueline’s sister Maria told her.
“I’m sorry to disappoint you, but I just can’t take all of this. Take care and you know that I love you”
“I know. Everything is in your car. I’ll hear from you” silent tears started to form in her eyes.
“Please don’t”
Apolo was driving as fast as he could to get there.
“I can’t let her leave. I love her. I just can’t”
“Remember out plan sis. I just left and I didn’t say where”
“Okay, but please think…”
“I did there’s nothing more to think about”
“Yes, there is are you sure you want to leave me like this?” Apolo came from behind. “You’re being a bit cold aren’t you?
“No I don’t think so. For once I’m thinking about my self. I’m sick and tired of all this. I don’t want to marry a man I don’t love and I don’t want a dysfunctional relationship with a man that I do love but doesn’t feel the same for me”, she finished breathlessly.
“What? No Jacqueline” he came closer to her and whispered, “I’ve always loved you”
“Oh Apolo, I love you too” she grabbed his face and kissed him. Time seemed to have stopped.
“What’s this?” it was her father. “Who the hell is this moron with the long hair only girls have long hair”
‘Moron with long hair, only girls have long hair? Talk about offensive’ Apolo thought.
Things started to look bad.
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What do you think? I know i have a small reading audience! ;D, but you guys rock thanks for the feedback and I will try hard not to disappoint you!
...nice chap. hmm...maybe they're gonna run away together? ok well keep writting!!!