Post by *^padfoot^* on Apr 18, 2006 20:12:41 GMT -5
OKay here it is...sorry it took a while to put up I've been busy with work and shchool I've got the story pretty much down.
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Chapter 7
“The question is what are you doing here?”
It was James he had followed her.
“She’s going to be my wife I have a right to her. Now lets go Jacquie!
She hid behind Rusty.
“Please don’t let him take me. He’ll only…oh,” She had said too much. He knew that James was the one behind the beating.
There wasn’t anything they could do if they did they would have ended up beating him badly. She had no other choice but to leave with him.
“Please leave me. Don’t do this” tears were streaming down her cheeks.
“I don’t think we should have let her go. He could beat her again,” Shani told Rusty.
“I know”
Apolo decided to come in for an early practice.
“Please James don’t! I don’t want to go through with this again. I don’t love you!”
“I don’t care and you are coming with me. I don’t care what you have to say so shut your trap!”
She was going to talk again when he hit her right below the eye. She fell back hitting the car .He was going to hit her again when a low angry voice came from behind.
“What do you think you are doing?”
It was Apolo he had disgust in his eyes.
“How dare you hit her, hurt her”
James launched himself and him but too slow. Apolo was distracted and James got him on the mouth he reacted and got him on the nose. James drove away with a terrible bloody nose.
Jacqueline sat on the floor staring up at Apolo at this time the two guys were out there. She wasn’t crying she was fed up with it. She got up and whispered a “Thank you” and started to walk away. Apolo felt empty inside. He grabbed her by the wrist pulled her toward him, so that they came face to face. He started to stroke her hair. He was trying to look at her eyes, but she wouldn’t.
“Look at me please. This is torture. I’m so sorry. I wouldn’t think he would do…do this”
“Neither did I, but yet I didn’t think you wouldn’t understand”
“Please don’t do this”
“Forgive me. My love for you is true. I love you. I can explain, just hear me out. If you don’t believe me after than then forget me”
“I’ll hear you”
“Really?” her eyes widened in disbelief. “Okay”
She hadn’t been this happy in a long time.
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Okay it's time to criticze my story!
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Chapter 7
“The question is what are you doing here?”
It was James he had followed her.
“She’s going to be my wife I have a right to her. Now lets go Jacquie!
She hid behind Rusty.
“Please don’t let him take me. He’ll only…oh,” She had said too much. He knew that James was the one behind the beating.
There wasn’t anything they could do if they did they would have ended up beating him badly. She had no other choice but to leave with him.
“Please leave me. Don’t do this” tears were streaming down her cheeks.
“I don’t think we should have let her go. He could beat her again,” Shani told Rusty.
“I know”
Apolo decided to come in for an early practice.
“Please James don’t! I don’t want to go through with this again. I don’t love you!”
“I don’t care and you are coming with me. I don’t care what you have to say so shut your trap!”
She was going to talk again when he hit her right below the eye. She fell back hitting the car .He was going to hit her again when a low angry voice came from behind.
“What do you think you are doing?”
It was Apolo he had disgust in his eyes.
“How dare you hit her, hurt her”
James launched himself and him but too slow. Apolo was distracted and James got him on the mouth he reacted and got him on the nose. James drove away with a terrible bloody nose.
Jacqueline sat on the floor staring up at Apolo at this time the two guys were out there. She wasn’t crying she was fed up with it. She got up and whispered a “Thank you” and started to walk away. Apolo felt empty inside. He grabbed her by the wrist pulled her toward him, so that they came face to face. He started to stroke her hair. He was trying to look at her eyes, but she wouldn’t.
“Look at me please. This is torture. I’m so sorry. I wouldn’t think he would do…do this”
“Neither did I, but yet I didn’t think you wouldn’t understand”
“Please don’t do this”
“Forgive me. My love for you is true. I love you. I can explain, just hear me out. If you don’t believe me after than then forget me”
“I’ll hear you”
“Really?” her eyes widened in disbelief. “Okay”
She hadn’t been this happy in a long time.
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Okay it's time to criticze my story!
