Post by apolosangel8907 on Apr 6, 2006 17:36:46 GMT -5
Hey!!! I finally figured out a title for my story!! Woo! I am just going to post the whole thing, so that you can read it all together and it is easier for me.
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Hey everyone! This is the start of my story. It's not very long so far, but just read it and if you want me to keep posting it as I write it, just tell me.
**I don't know Apolo or any of his friends. If any event in this story has happened in real life, it is purely a concidence.**
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"I gotta keep running" She thought, as she ran through the streets of Colorado Springs. She ran from the pain and lies, she ran from the life she thought she had known. She ran from the lie that was her life, and the painful truth that was her furure. Her mind was blank, yet racing at the same time. Her breath was in perfect harmony with her pounding footsteps. She could hear her blood pulsing through her veins. She was completly unaware of the throbbing pain in her legs, or the blood dripping down her arm, or even the stinging tears flowing from her eyes. All she knew was that if she wanted to live, she had to keep running.
She knew that she had lost him a couple of blocks back, but she couldn't waste even a second, her life was on the line. She had been sleeping when she heard her boyfriend come in. He had seemed distant latley, but last night she found out why. She had been cleaning up after another one of their fights, she couldn't even remember what the fight was about, or who started it, but she knew that she would have to come up with another excude to why she had a bruise. This bruise was the third one this week. She had already said that she fell and hit the doorknob and she ran into the railing in the dark. What else could she say? Her friends had to be getting suspicious, shouldn't they?
She couldn't keep this act up much longer. While cleaning up, she found Marks cell phone open, with a text message from a girl named Briella. The message said, "My place 7, I have strawberries and whipped cream." So thats why Mark had been so distant, he was cheating on her.
She was in such shock that she couldn't talk, cry or even think, so she blankly went to her room and went to bed.
She woke in a rage and did the only thing she knew how to do, run. She ran untill she thought she couldn't run any further, then ran further. When she felt her legs would fall off, she turned around and ran back. Physcially and emotionaly exhausted, she collapsed onto her bed and fell into a deep, fitful sleep. She had only been asleep for an hour when Mark burst through the door.
She knew she shouldnt confront him, he was violent, but she was so angry that she couldn't think strait.
"Your cheating on me."
"I don't know what you are talking about Nicole!!"
"Mark, I know about Briella, I saw the message!"
"How dare you look at my messages! So what I am cheating on you, I only did it because you are worse that a cold fish!"
When Mark said that, the flood gates burst open and Nicole couldn't stop sobbing. Mark picked up the closest thing to him, which happened to be an antique lamp and slammed it against the wall.
Fire raged in his eyes and he started to attack Nicole. When Nicole tried to pull away, Mark picked up the broken lamp, and tried to hit Nicole in the head. He only suceeded in slicing her arm open. Nicole kicked and punched and scratched her way free and ran out of their small apartment. Mark quickly followed.
Nicole ran to the nearest building she could after making sure that she had lost Mark.
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Nicole immedeatly collapsed onto the floor as soon as she was in the saftey of the building. All she could hear was the scrape of blades on ice. Something about the sound of blades on ice was so intoxicating, slowly she got up and walked down a narrow hallway. At the end of the hallway she found an ice rink. On the rink she saw a lone figure. He had a red bandana holding back his long shiny brown hair. He looked so focused, a look of determination on his face. His eyes, a deep hazel, flickered with the fires of determination and love of the game. His body looked like it was born to be on the ice. He exuded a feirce, almost primal competive aura, he demanded respect. He looked up, and saw a beautiful brunett standing by the entry to the rink. He wasn't sure, but it looked like she was crying. After taking a second glance, he noticed that she was infact crying, sobbing at that, and she was bleeding. Nicole hadn't noticed him skate up to her, she was trying to do what she did best, disappear.
"Are you okay?"
"Yes, no, I don't know. Don't worry about me."
"Your bleeding really bad. Let be help you wash that up."
"No, it's fine, sorry I disturbed you, you don't need to worry.
"I'm not going to let you go untill I know that you will be okay. I'm Apolo by the way."
"I'm Nicole. Apolo, thank you so much for your offer, but I am used to fending for myself. You are very kind, but I fon't want to see you hurt just because you got involved."
Nicole, I want to help, and how would I get hurt by helping you?"
"Long story short, Abusive boyfriend found out that I knew he was cheating and threw a lamp at me. He is very violent and I don't want to see you hurt."
"Nicole, at the moment, I am not concerned for my saftey. Now lets get you cleaned up and if you want, you can tell me about it."
"Apolo, I have never met a man quite like you. I'll come with you, but you have to promise me that you will be careful."
Nicole and Apolo walked into the Sports Injurt and Rehibilitation Center. The cut was not nearly as deep or severe as either of them thought. Nicole didn't need stiches, but did need to take an antibiotice to prevent infection.
"Nicole, I don't want to seem forward, but do you want to come to my dorm so you can relax and clam down?"
"Your not being forward, and yes I would. Do you have a car? I kind of ran here and I don't want to meet up with my boyfriend."
"Yeah, I have a car. Want to go now?"
Apolo opened up the door and checked to see if there was anyone suspicious in the parking lot. He pulled his Lexus right up to the doors so that Nicole wouldn't have to walk. Just as they were pulling onto the main road Nicole Screamed.
"Oh My God Apolo! There he is, theres Mark!"
Mark also saw Nicole, and as her eyes grew in fear, flames of rage flickered in Marks. He was just about to smash in Nicoles window when Apolo quickly turned onto a side street.
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Hope you all liked it! Please comment so I know whether or not to continue.
Jacy
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Hey everyone! This is the start of my story. It's not very long so far, but just read it and if you want me to keep posting it as I write it, just tell me.
**I don't know Apolo or any of his friends. If any event in this story has happened in real life, it is purely a concidence.**
*********************************************
"I gotta keep running" She thought, as she ran through the streets of Colorado Springs. She ran from the pain and lies, she ran from the life she thought she had known. She ran from the lie that was her life, and the painful truth that was her furure. Her mind was blank, yet racing at the same time. Her breath was in perfect harmony with her pounding footsteps. She could hear her blood pulsing through her veins. She was completly unaware of the throbbing pain in her legs, or the blood dripping down her arm, or even the stinging tears flowing from her eyes. All she knew was that if she wanted to live, she had to keep running.
She knew that she had lost him a couple of blocks back, but she couldn't waste even a second, her life was on the line. She had been sleeping when she heard her boyfriend come in. He had seemed distant latley, but last night she found out why. She had been cleaning up after another one of their fights, she couldn't even remember what the fight was about, or who started it, but she knew that she would have to come up with another excude to why she had a bruise. This bruise was the third one this week. She had already said that she fell and hit the doorknob and she ran into the railing in the dark. What else could she say? Her friends had to be getting suspicious, shouldn't they?
She couldn't keep this act up much longer. While cleaning up, she found Marks cell phone open, with a text message from a girl named Briella. The message said, "My place 7, I have strawberries and whipped cream." So thats why Mark had been so distant, he was cheating on her.
She was in such shock that she couldn't talk, cry or even think, so she blankly went to her room and went to bed.
She woke in a rage and did the only thing she knew how to do, run. She ran untill she thought she couldn't run any further, then ran further. When she felt her legs would fall off, she turned around and ran back. Physcially and emotionaly exhausted, she collapsed onto her bed and fell into a deep, fitful sleep. She had only been asleep for an hour when Mark burst through the door.
She knew she shouldnt confront him, he was violent, but she was so angry that she couldn't think strait.
"Your cheating on me."
"I don't know what you are talking about Nicole!!"
"Mark, I know about Briella, I saw the message!"
"How dare you look at my messages! So what I am cheating on you, I only did it because you are worse that a cold fish!"
When Mark said that, the flood gates burst open and Nicole couldn't stop sobbing. Mark picked up the closest thing to him, which happened to be an antique lamp and slammed it against the wall.
Fire raged in his eyes and he started to attack Nicole. When Nicole tried to pull away, Mark picked up the broken lamp, and tried to hit Nicole in the head. He only suceeded in slicing her arm open. Nicole kicked and punched and scratched her way free and ran out of their small apartment. Mark quickly followed.
Nicole ran to the nearest building she could after making sure that she had lost Mark.
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Well I hope you like it! Leave Feedback!
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Nicole immedeatly collapsed onto the floor as soon as she was in the saftey of the building. All she could hear was the scrape of blades on ice. Something about the sound of blades on ice was so intoxicating, slowly she got up and walked down a narrow hallway. At the end of the hallway she found an ice rink. On the rink she saw a lone figure. He had a red bandana holding back his long shiny brown hair. He looked so focused, a look of determination on his face. His eyes, a deep hazel, flickered with the fires of determination and love of the game. His body looked like it was born to be on the ice. He exuded a feirce, almost primal competive aura, he demanded respect. He looked up, and saw a beautiful brunett standing by the entry to the rink. He wasn't sure, but it looked like she was crying. After taking a second glance, he noticed that she was infact crying, sobbing at that, and she was bleeding. Nicole hadn't noticed him skate up to her, she was trying to do what she did best, disappear.
"Are you okay?"
"Yes, no, I don't know. Don't worry about me."
"Your bleeding really bad. Let be help you wash that up."
"No, it's fine, sorry I disturbed you, you don't need to worry.
"I'm not going to let you go untill I know that you will be okay. I'm Apolo by the way."
"I'm Nicole. Apolo, thank you so much for your offer, but I am used to fending for myself. You are very kind, but I fon't want to see you hurt just because you got involved."
Nicole, I want to help, and how would I get hurt by helping you?"
"Long story short, Abusive boyfriend found out that I knew he was cheating and threw a lamp at me. He is very violent and I don't want to see you hurt."
"Nicole, at the moment, I am not concerned for my saftey. Now lets get you cleaned up and if you want, you can tell me about it."
"Apolo, I have never met a man quite like you. I'll come with you, but you have to promise me that you will be careful."
Nicole and Apolo walked into the Sports Injurt and Rehibilitation Center. The cut was not nearly as deep or severe as either of them thought. Nicole didn't need stiches, but did need to take an antibiotice to prevent infection.
"Nicole, I don't want to seem forward, but do you want to come to my dorm so you can relax and clam down?"
"Your not being forward, and yes I would. Do you have a car? I kind of ran here and I don't want to meet up with my boyfriend."
"Yeah, I have a car. Want to go now?"
Apolo opened up the door and checked to see if there was anyone suspicious in the parking lot. He pulled his Lexus right up to the doors so that Nicole wouldn't have to walk. Just as they were pulling onto the main road Nicole Screamed.
"Oh My God Apolo! There he is, theres Mark!"
Mark also saw Nicole, and as her eyes grew in fear, flames of rage flickered in Marks. He was just about to smash in Nicoles window when Apolo quickly turned onto a side street.
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Hope you all liked it! Please comment so I know whether or not to continue.
Jacy
