Immortal Love CH8

[jennaceeta25]

thanks Ally! :]
You're so sweet!
Any new stories with you?

She woke up to a loud bang. She took off the covers and knew Heath had fallen out of bed. She sniffled a laugh and heard a grunt. “Heath, you ok?” She ran over to his side and saw a tiny blanket scrunched up around his torso. She remembered Jesus didn’t want them under the same covers last night after they almost shared a friendly kiss. She didn’t think it was that harmful but Jesus appeared and soon her Poppop arrived and they both thought it was alright if Heath be in a separate blanket. He looked like he had a pretty bad fall but she knew the pain would go away and soon they’ll be back in bed. That thought was broken by his laughter and he took her down on the ground. He had her pinned, with his hands attached to her arms and her legs taken up by his strong quads. “Heath, what are you doing?” She was trying to get off his grip but he was too strong. “Why so serious?!” His voice sounded just like the Joker again and she thought maybe she was dreaming. “Heath, please stop, you’re scaring me…” He closed his eyes and laughed, that evil Joker laugh that made her cringe. “Kill the BATMAN!” She moved her face away from his stinky breath and wanted to gag right then. She would, if it wasn’t for his knife being brought out from under his jean shorts. “Lets put a smile on that face. Umm.” She squirmed with all her might and knocked him down with her fist. She got up and noticed Jesus and her Poppop were right behind her. “Oh shoot. Jesus, is it the anniversary already?” She crossed the room, surveying Heath knocked out on the hard wood floor. “What do you mean anniversary, Pop?” He spinned her around and she was face to face with a calendar. She knew darn well, that wasn’t there a second ago. “See, he died today a year ago.” She crossed her arms against her chest, “Why did he do the Joker monologue?” She turned around and saw Jesus picking Heath up and they vanished. “He told everybody here that, before he died he loved playing Joker the most.” She sighed, “Why couldn’t he be Patrick in 10 things I hate about you?” Poppop shrugged, “I don’t know. Ask him.” Another second went by until she felt a tap on her shoulder. She spinned around and there was Heath. “Jen, I-uh, I saw what happened. I had no idea. Did I hurt you?” She saw his eyes were back to normal, those chocolate brown pools of innocent charm. She missed him. “No. Just tell me when it’s your anniversary, alright?” He nodded and they both shared a hug. “I think people start being their old selves before they died. That’s why Heath started to act like Joker. He loved that part the most.” She smiled when Heath and her poppop shared a handshake. And then Dave vanished. “You really know how to play the Joker, Heath, I’ll give you that.” He smiled, despite him still feeling bad about scaring her like that. “You can hit me if you want.” She giggled, “I already did, if you remember. Hit you square on the nose.” He got right up in her face before he said, “Well, I wasn’t ready. Rematch.” She stepped away from Heath, “Are you kidding?” He grabbed her hand before she could protest and they arrived in the kitchen in another second and a half. “Heath, what are you doing?” He threw bags of chips and junk off the table. “You’re making a mess. Stop.” She took his arm and the next second he pulled her thumb out and lined it up with his. “Thumb recesling.” She straightened up since he was a foot taller than her, maybe more. “Bring it, Ledger!” His thumb was going every which way, she couldn’t concentrate on what his strategy was. The next second his thumb was straddling hers, “What are you guys doing?” They both stopped when Sarah came down the stairs and laughed, “Who would have thought. Heath won.” Sarah crossed the room while Jen grabbed a hold of Heath the best she could before he had Sarah in a choke hold. “Heath, it’s true. You’re stronger than me. You won.” She pat his back before Sarah could answer, “Or she let you win.” Jen sat down and banged her head on the table. Good thing it’s heaven. You don’t feel a thing. “What, you think you’re stronger than me, Volk? I’ve known you for three months, you couldn’t even lift a bag of groceries.” Sarah was 4’8”, but she didn’t even act like it. She was up on Heath like cats on mice. “It was hot. You know I can’t sweat.” Jen couldn’t take it anymore, she needed some air. Once she was outside she could still hear them arguing about her and who started it to make her leave. She surveyed the trees and the sunshine, since it was still daylight. It was about 12 noon, she thought. But Jesus answered back that it was only 11. A lot of birds were flying overhead and a beautiful swing set from the branch of a tree caught her attention. She started walking over and when she got there a pretty scene came into view. A lake was shown right in front of her eyes and two girls were swinging from a couple of tree branches. And three geese were swimming along, one by one. She was about to see where the others were coming from but Heath came up behind her and ignogled that he was here. She turned too quickly and their mouths met. The two girls from the lake watched in wonder at what would happen next. They both felt love in a second but when they broke apart and smiled, Dave was standing right in front of them. “Heath, I thought I told you…” Heath quickly backed up and colitated with a blonde man in his 30’s. “Pop, really. I can take care of myself. I-” “You are not staying here for a long period of time. Jesus is making you stronger as we speak.” She looked over at Heath’s worried expression and they both knew that what they had, couldn’t be shown. Once you kissed somebody, you’re in heaven for life up here. “Jesus just sent word, the kiss never happened. Don’t make me have to ground you, young man,” He pointed at Heath and Heath nodded, frightened. “Y-Yes sir. I won’t lay a hand on her again, sir.” Jen smacked her head and knew they both haven’t forgotten about what transpired in their kiss. Once Dave left behind the bushes, he was gone. “He is one scary man.”


Thanks for reading my story. :]
I appreciate.

[ally]

wow! That was very thrilling! Especially when he turns into the Joker. it's pretty frightening lol I really loved it! I cannot wait to read more! very well done! I loved everything about it!

[jennaceeta25]

thanks Ally for all your kind words. :]
I appreciate it..
now I need to learn to finish my stories. lol.


He used the scary word as if he were feeling cold. She got up off the swing and sat down on the cool green grass. He sat down right by her, stretching his back out. “It’s so not fair!” She made an angry sound and she felt his hands massage her back. She heard him whisper, “Baby it’s ok. You won’t even remember it.” She looked into his eyes, “But I want too.” She was going to say more ,when Susie, Heath’s ex-girlfriend came into view. “Hello Heath, darling. And hi, uh, is it Jen?” She smiled, bitterly, “Yes.” Susie had on brown short skirt and a skinny tied dyed shirt. And big high heels, the color of white. “Heath, I been wanting to ask, are you busy this afternoon.?” He didn’t even look up, Jen thought, maybe they had a bad relationship to make him feel this way. Jesus didn’t even answer. “I’m busy, Sue, maybe some other time.” She rolled her eyes, “Not while she’s around.” And then she vanished out into the tree’s. “I just don’t like that girl.” She giggled, “Me neither.” She was still looking at the geese when she felt his hand hold hers, “I’m falling in love with you.” She could feel his words in her ears, when he whispered it to her, “Heath-” He slowly got up, “I know. That was too forceful. I think you’re ok to find your way around, eh?” And before she could say a word, he vanished.


The next couple of days she spent with her best friend Sarah and her roommate John. She kept wondering when Heath would show up. She was beginning to miss him. “Hey, Jen, there’s a party down at the sanctuary, c’mon. John brought you a date.” She surveyed her date from a far, it was John’s little nephew Steve. Jen laughed, “I don’t think so.” Sarah smacked her head loudly, “Jen, you got to get out sometime. And Heath’s going to be there.” Jen sighed, picking up the new Jesus Christ magazine with Heath plastered all over it about his new play called ‘The Knights Tale.’ “I rather not. He probably doesn’t even want to see me after I hurt his feelings.” Sarah sat right next to her, she had on a nice red dress with sneakers on. “And what if he still has feelings for you and he was nervous about the whole thing. And I bought you a new dress at the St. Tiffany’s warehouse. Dude, they were on sale. Try it on, c’mon.” She nudged Jen until she got upstairs and into her nicely fit white gown with sparkly silver heels. “You look gorgeous, Jen. Absolutely gorgeous.” She smiled at John and thanked him. “Heath is going to be all over that tonight.” She flung her whole body around to face Sarah, “I can’t even kiss him, let alone do that stuff, Sarah, c‘mon.” Sarah answered, “I should have told you this but I didn’t think Heath was the right one but that was just ignorance on my part,” Jen nodded her head, slightly, “There’s a place called ‘Shooters Bay’. No, it’s not full of guns, Steve. So don’t even,” Steve frowned in his uncles arms, he died of pneumonia last June. He was just two years old. Him and John were wearing matching black tux’s with brown ties around their necks. “Nobody in heaven can even see it, not even God or Jesus. You’re safe there.” She thanked them both and took a taxi to the sanctuary.

Enjoy! :]

[tabatha]

i love how you described the scene where the two girls were on the swings. i pitcured that in my head.

[ally]

I'm really loving this story! and no problem !! I really think you will be able to finish this. it has become such a wonderful story, and I can see it being finished and complete ;D I really can! This is amazing and please keep up the good work

[jennaceeta25]

awh, thanks guys, you're making me cry. :]]
It's because of you guys, I'll finish it the right way.
So thanks. :]]

She was almost at the sanctuary when she saw Heath and Susie linking arms down the red carpet. He’s such a traitor, she thought. “Bruce, I don’t think this is a good idea.” Her driver, Bruce died of colon cancer two years ago. Left a wife and five children. He was about to turn around when Jesus magically appeared next to her. “Jen, I have some bad news,” She was beginning to have tears in her eyes, “Yea think.” Jesus took her hand and shook his head without talking, “We can’t seem to bring your body back to life. It looks like your staying for good.” She knew what Jesus said was true, his eyes showed worry and fear. “Is my parents ok?” Jesus shook his head, he was glowing so much her eyes were starting to hurt, “You might see your mom soon.” And that’s all he said and vanished. “You should go in and celebrate. You get a nice champagne bottle. Have some on me, eh, princess?” She smiled despite all the news she got flung at her and Heath being with somebody else. “Hey, I heard around these parts that a ‘Knight’ guys been looking for you.” Bruce was a little heavy but he was starting to grow on her, he wore a blue jacket and some nice black work pants. “Does the name Heath ring a bell?” One finger shot up in the air and she knew she got it right, “Yep, that’s the one.” She gave him a ten dollar tip since it was quite a long drive from Sarah’s house. “Thanks Bruce.” He waved, shouting, “Hope you find him. He’s a lucky guy.” She was about to say goodbye when the car disappeared, driving to another appointment.

It gets intense from here..
thank you again for reading. :]]

[ally]

awww I feel so bad for Jen. I don't know why he went with Susie, that wasn't the best move lol I really love how well this story is being developed. we always appreciate when you write this so we can enjoy it ;D

[jennaceeta25]

thank you. :]
I love the problems they have, makes them seem normal.

She walked right inside, bringing her ticket with her for the food and the refreshments. From the outside the church looked small but from the inside it looked enormous. A band was playing way back, far from the pews. A huge table was to the left for all the food and drinks. In heaven you can get as much as you want. Just think of something and it appears. She saw him right away when she wasn’t even looking. He had on an armor over his black tux from his play a couple hours ago. She wanted to go but she didn’t want to strike a conversation with him. That would be very awkward. Now, she had no choice. She weaved her away around the crowd until Sarah waved her over. “Well, are you going to talk to him, or what?” Jen shrugged her shoulders, while Steve bounced around her feet. “I think I’ll just stand here the whole night.” Sarah shook her head, “Can you watch Steve for awhile. I can’t seem to find John.” Jen nodded, “Yeah, I’m sure you can’t find him.” Jen said it sarcastically and Sarah laughed, “You can’t blame a girl for trying.” They both waved after each other until Sarah was out the door, into ‘Shooters Bay’ land. “Hey, Steve, you hungry?” He nodded so she took his little hand and they took off to the food table. “Jen, hey!” She looked in the direction of the voice and saw it was Susie, what a -whatever. “Hey Susie. Love the dress.” She lied, she hated it. She hated how perfect it looked and how it looped in the corners of her shoulders. It was blue, the color of the sky. “My mom bought it for me from the St. Vincent’s Boutique. Where did you buy yours?” St. Vincent’s Boutique was the most expensive store around Heaven. A bottle of water was $1.89. “My best friend bought it for me. St. Tiffany’s.” Susie motioned for someone to come over from across the room and Heath came into view. Typical. They both didn’t say anything and from the gaze they shown each other, it was becoming hot even though the air was circling the room. Heath got up the courage to warmly welcome her little friend, “Hey, buddy, what’s your name.” Steve shyly looked away and shielded himself behind her legs. “His names Steve. He’s my date.” Heath’s gaze landed on Jen’s blue eyes, and it never faltered, “Heath, It’s Angela, over there. My mother, you have to meet her.” Heath gulped, forgetting all the words in the English Dictionary. “Bye bye Prince.” She heard what Steve said but she just didn’t know how it calculated in her brain. Once he was from view, her eyes went straight for Steve . “Lets get some sandwiches, my man.” She retrieved some sandwiches and nuggets for them both. The drinks were just water. They both sat on the pews next to an elderly couple holding hands. “Jenny, I want to be a knight.” She smiled, “You can be anything you want as long as you eat your dinner.” He obeyed and bit into his cheese sandwich and watched the band play an encore. “Jen. Hey. You must be the new girl around these parts.” Jen recognized the elderly lady from across the street from Sarah’s house. “Hi, yes I am. I’m sorry, what are your names?” Before she could answer, Heath took Steve into his arms and softly put him on his lap. “I know, don’t tell me. It’s Emily and Robert Clark.” They both applauded him and congratulated him on his wonderful performance and left. “I want to be a knight, Jenny.” Her checks flushed red when Heath invaded her eyes. “How about I teach you later on tonight?” Steve was delighted and ran into John’s arms, telling him about Heath and called him ‘Prince.’ She couldn’t stand how Heath made her smile. Once he looked away, she swiftly got up and he walked after her. She felt his skin and turned into a puddle. “Jen, about that day, I-I was taking your poppop’s advice. I shouldn’t have said what I said but it’s true, it’s still true.” She looked down at his hand still on her arm and did everyway possible not to look into his eyes. “Jen, look at me,” She smiled once her eyes met his, “Heath, my sister’s here. Heath.” His eyes shut tight in annoyance and he fled with her running after him. “Heath, wait. She’s in love with you. You can’t just runaway like this.” They stopped right in front of the water fountain leading to his house. He was the choir director on most Sundays. He had the church to himself at night. “She’s not in love with me. She’s in love with my money and my fathers last name.” She softly thanked God that Heath wasn’t in love with Susie. “I want to show you my script I’ve been writing.” He unlocked the water plug and took the whole water system out. All that’s left was a door knob. “Is it about the Joker this time?” He laughed, his sweet laugh and shook his head, “No. It’s not finished yet. I want you to be the photographer, though. If you want” She looked into his eyes and gave him a big hug. His hand shut the door behind them and all you saw was kitchen supplies and a living room full of couches and pillows. A big screen television was in the left corner of the living room. That’s where all his savings came from. “Heath, you’re wonderful. I’ll get on it, in a few days, I promise. I have a few papers to fill out. I’m staying, you know.” Once they felt comfortable around each other, it was hard to keep their hands be. “You mean, you died.” He crossed the room to get two Pepsi’s while Jen snooped around. He still had his sword from ‘The Patriot’ back in 1999, hung in his special case. “Yes. I died in a car accident.” “It’s better than accidental overdose.” Once he stood in front of her she shook her head, “Not in the book of ‘Deaths.’ Yours trumps mine, overall.” He opened both their Pepsi’s and sat on his couch, “I love your dress., by the way. It matches your eyes.” She laid her head on his shoulder and his arm snaked around her, “Heath-” He brought her chin up near his face and they kissed romantically. “I’m in love with you.” He smiled between her lips, “Jesus won’t be so happy about this.” She agreed, but they continued to kiss anyway.


I decided to write a huge paragraph so people wouldn't have short ones. Enjoy!

[A.O.Freak]

Aug 18, 2008 15:41:38 GMT -5 jennaceeta25 said:

thank you. :]
I love the problems they have, makes them seem normal.

She walked right inside, bringing her ticket with her for the food and the refreshments. From the outside the church looked small but from the inside it looked enormous. A band was playing way back, far from the pews. A huge table was to the left for all the food and drinks. In heaven you can get as much as you want. Just think of something and it appears. She saw him right away when she wasn’t even looking. He had on an armor over his black tux from his play a couple hours ago. She wanted to go but she didn’t want to strike a conversation with him. That would be very awkward. Now, she had no choice. She weaved her away around the crowd until Sarah waved her over. “Well, are you going to talk to him, or what?” Jen shrugged her shoulders, while Steve bounced around her feet. “I think I’ll just stand here the whole night.” Sarah shook her head, “Can you watch Steve for awhile. I can’t seem to find John.” Jen nodded, “Yeah, I’m sure you can’t find him.” Jen said it sarcastically and Sarah laughed, “You can’t blame a girl for trying.” They both waved after each other until Sarah was out the door, into ‘Shooters Bay’ land. “Hey, Steve, you hungry?” He nodded so she took his little hand and they took off to the food table. “Jen, hey!” She looked in the direction of the voice and saw it was Susie, what a -whatever. “Hey Susie. Love the dress.” She lied, she hated it. She hated how perfect it looked and how it looped in the corners of her shoulders. It was blue, the color of the sky. “My mom bought it for me from the St. Vincent’s Boutique. Where did you buy yours?” St. Vincent’s Boutique was the most expensive store around Heaven. A bottle of water was $1.89. “My best friend bought it for me. St. Tiffany’s.” Susie motioned for someone to come over from across the room and Heath came into view. Typical. They both didn’t say anything and from the gaze they shown each other, it was becoming hot even though the air was circling the room. Heath got up the courage to warmly welcome her little friend, “Hey, buddy, what’s your name.” Steve shyly looked away and shielded himself behind her legs. “His names Steve. He’s my date.” Heath’s gaze landed on Jen’s blue eyes, and it never faltered, “Heath, It’s Angela, over there. My mother, you have to meet her.” Heath gulped, forgetting all the words in the English Dictionary. “Bye bye Prince.” She heard what Steve said but she just didn’t know how it calculated in her brain. Once he was from view, her eyes went straight for Steve . “Lets get some sandwiches, my man.” She retrieved some sandwiches and nuggets for them both. The drinks were just water. They both sat on the pews next to an elderly couple holding hands. “Jenny, I want to be a knight.” She smiled, “You can be anything you want as long as you eat your dinner.” He obeyed and bit into his cheese sandwich and watched the band play an encore. “Jen. Hey. You must be the new girl around these parts.” Jen recognized the elderly lady from across the street from Sarah’s house. “Hi, yes I am. I’m sorry, what are your names?” Before she could answer, Heath took Steve into his arms and softly put him on his lap. “I know, don’t tell me. It’s Emily and Robert Clark.” They both applauded him and congratulated him on his wonderful performance and left. “I want to be a knight, Jenny.” Her checks flushed red when Heath invaded her eyes. “How about I teach you later on tonight?” Steve was delighted and ran into John’s arms, telling him about Heath and called him ‘Prince.’ She couldn’t stand how Heath made her smile. Once he looked away, she swiftly got up and he walked after her. She felt his skin and turned into a puddle. “Jen, about that day, I-I was taking your poppop’s advice. I shouldn’t have said what I said but it’s true, it’s still true.” She looked down at his hand still on her arm and did everyway possible not to look into his eyes. “Jen, look at me,” She smiled once her eyes met his, “Heath, my sister’s here. Heath.” His eyes shut tight in annoyance and he fled with her running after him. “Heath, wait. She’s in love with you. You can’t just runaway like this.” They stopped right in front of the water fountain leading to his house. He was the choir director on most Sundays. He had the church to himself at night. “She’s not in love with me. She’s in love with my money and my fathers last name.” She softly thanked God that Heath wasn’t in love with Susie. “I want to show you my script I’ve been writing.” He unlocked the water plug and took the whole water system out. All that’s left was a door knob. “Is it about the Joker this time?” He laughed, his sweet laugh and shook his head, “No. It’s not finished yet. I want you to be the photographer, though. If you want” She looked into his eyes and gave him a big hug. His hand shut the door behind them and all you saw was kitchen supplies and a living room full of couches and pillows. A big screen television was in the left corner of the living room. That’s where all his savings came from. “Heath, you’re wonderful. I’ll get on it, in a few days, I promise. I have a few papers to fill out. I’m staying, you know.” Once they felt comfortable around each other, it was hard to keep their hands be. “You mean, you died.” He crossed the room to get two Pepsi’s while Jen snooped around. He still had his sword from ‘The Patriot’ back in 1999, hung in his special case. “Yes. I died in a car accident.” “It’s better than accidental overdose.” Once he stood in front of her she shook her head, “Not in the book of ‘Deaths.’ Yours trumps mine, overall.” He opened both their Pepsi’s and sat on his couch, “I love your dress., by the way. It matches your eyes.” She laid her head on his shoulder and his arm snaked around her, “Heath-” He brought her chin up near his face and they kissed romantically. “I’m in love with you.” He smiled between her lips, “Jesus won’t be so happy about this.” She agreed, but they continued to kiss anyway.


I decided to write a huge paragraph so people wouldn't have short ones. Enjoy!

Loved it Jenn

[jennaceeta25]

just so you know..
this is what he looks like in the story:

kinda between this:


(his last days, btw... )

& this:



thanks, Bella.
You're so sweet!

[ally]

yeah! that's what I like! Is you make them seem normal. that's one thing that makes the story so good! and yay! they get back together!! ;D ;D ;D that makes me very happy and it's so cute!! oh and that first pic that you posted there where you said that was his last days? wow does he ever remind me of Johnny Depp! And alittle bit like one of my favs, Ben Barnes lol that's crazy!

[jennaceeta25]

I know, Ally! You're right!
People on a Heath forum say, he looked just like Johnny Depp. They are both of Irish decent, maybe that's why. :]

Upstairs, Jesus was surveying Heath and Jen from his newly computer. He had all the devices of everyone in heaven and could, with a click of a button, see what was going on with them at any time. He used Heath cause he still had his charm and Jesus didn’t trust him with Jen. He didn’t like them together at all. Heath was supposed to be with Susie, he made them to be together. Maybe he should bring Joker back. Jesus wasn’t evil all the time but this was important. Jen was going to be with Kevin, Sarah’s next door neighbor, whether she liked it or not. Kevin had a nice way about him, he never was an actor. He was a photographer for a living. He died from drinking the developer by accident. It was a painful death. “That’s right, Heath, I’m not very happy with this at all.” Jesus picked up his index finger and pressed the Joker button near Heath’s biography. He sat back in his chair with his hands folded across his chest, waiting for the Joker to spring into action.


The whole chapter is intense.
I'm sorry if I make Jesus out to be mean...
I'm sure He's not like that at all.

[ally]

ahhh! UH OH! Jen better watch out lol wow he does seem mean in this but it's for a logical reason. I like how you make it a 'half to' for Jesus to do that, believing he's supposed to be with Susie. I really hope this is a great ending and that everything will be ok! hehe

I really really really like this story. I always come on here to read it cause it's so fascinating

[jennaceeta25]

awh, thanks Ally. I'm happy you like it!
That means a lot to me.
this chapter is intense too.



Heath felt something growling in his stomach and he had no idea what was happening to his attitude towards Jen. He was beginning to grow a hatred towards her, and his voice began to change. “Why… so… serious?” He watched how her eyes become wide and started backing up. She banged against the wall of his wide screen television, “Heath, is it your anniversary again?” He watched her stare in horror, despite him strangling with all his might not to turn into his evil character from ‘The Dark Knight’ His attire was still the same but his whole personality was giving way to the Joker every second. “Jen, you have to leave now.” She watched him, completely collapse after he spoke and she ran for the door. She was still trying to open the key lock but it looked like someone from the outside had put the water fountain back together again. She had no idea that Heath had a bathroom stall for an elevator. She felt a tap on her shoulder and silently prayed she was somewhere else. Once she opened her eyes again she was in his bathroom stall, franticly searching for a way out. There was too many buttons to push. Two were blue, five were yellow and six were pink. She didn’t know the difference between the colors. She was beginning to feel tears coming out from her eyes. “Why don't we cut you up into little pieces and feed you to your pooches? Hmm?” She heard him loud and clear from the stairway leading to the place she was standing. “It’s all…part of the plan.” She saw his face appear and she didn’t want him to come any closer. So she sacrificed, and pressed one of the pink buttons and she felt herself go up one story. The door swung open and she saw her poppop right away. He was fixing the new light bulb to his lamp. She looked around and saw different tools and a couple of couches and that was it. Maybe a couple of electric saws. He looked up and asked, “What’s wrong Jennifer? What happened?” She collapsed onto his fat belly, “Heath turned into his archenemy. I don’t even know how it started.” He hugged her tightly and knew what Jesus was doing. Dave knew everything Jesus did, he was His one true friend. Not that Dave didn’t like Heath, he just didn’t think he was the right man for his granddaughter. “Maybe it’s you that makes the character come out. I haven’t seen him come out since Heath arrived here.” She nodded, despite tears still falling.

[ally]

I'm so sorry I haven't been around in awhile to read this.. but I just read this chapter.. and whoa is it intense I feel so bad for Jen! I wonder whats going to happen next! Keep up the good work! ;D