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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 26, 2007 12:39:16 GMT -5
I apologize for the delay, but here's part 1 of chapter 5!
Chapter 5: The Vampiric Battle Royale..............
"Calm down, dude. I'm sure that Artemis WILL eventually give Apolo up and with your devastating good looks, I'm sure that Artemis will fall for you HARD!" Rex said.
"Don't encourage him, Rex! We should let Artemis decide who she wants to be with. At least, I respect her!" Ally said.
(sorry that this was so short. part 2 will come up later.)
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Post by ally on Jun 26, 2007 12:44:20 GMT -5
cool! cant wait to read more  |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jul 26, 2007 12:33:54 GMT -5
I apologize for the delay, but here's part 1 of chapter 5! Chapter 5: The Vampiric Battle Royale.............. "Calm down, dude. I'm sure that Artemis WILL eventually give Apolo up and with your devastating good looks, I'm sure that Artemis will fall for you HARD!" Rex said. "Don't encourage him, Rex! We should let Artemis decide who she wants to be with. At least, I respect her!" Ally said. (sorry that this was so short. part 2 will come up later.) Here's part 2! (sorry it took me so long and if it's too short!) "Whoa! someone's in a rampage!" Rex said. "Why do I have to choose. I love BOTH of these men! The only way I'll be able to choose is if they PROVE themselves to me." I said. "You know, that doesn't sound like a bad idea. Besides, Artemis is a bit on the weak side right now anyway." Apolo said as he looked at me with those evil eyes. "I agree. Besides, Artemis is the one woman who I would die for and she's the ONLY woman that has ever attracted me." Jeremy said. (OH BOY, this is getting pretty interesting........) |
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Post by ally on Jul 26, 2007 21:39:33 GMT -5
hehehehe cant wait to read more lots going on right now!! ;D and dont worry ill make my immortal love chapter 7 more "interesting" lmao  |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jul 27, 2007 10:57:35 GMT -5
Ally, I know I'm bugging you with this, but could ya at least tell me a little bit of what's gonna happen in chapter 7, please?
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Post by ally on Jul 27, 2007 11:26:10 GMT -5
hahaha i dont even know myself  as u could see im not into the writing thing anymore.. so im sorry i couldnt tell u wat happens in the 7th one cause i dont even know |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jul 27, 2007 11:39:30 GMT -5
Perhaps I could give you some ideas?
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Post by ally on Jul 27, 2007 11:42:01 GMT -5
well if u want to thats up to u.. but i am sure that this will be the last chapter in the series along with Once in a Lifetime.. that story only has a couple chapters left to go b4 i end it lol
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Aug 31, 2007 11:44:22 GMT -5
I apologize for the delay, but here's part 1 of chapter 5! Chapter 5: The Vampiric Battle Royale.............. "Calm down, dude. I'm sure that Artemis WILL eventually give Apolo up and with your devastating good looks, I'm sure that Artemis will fall for you HARD!" Rex said. "Don't encourage him, Rex! We should let Artemis decide who she wants to be with. At least, I respect her!" Ally said. (sorry that this was so short. part 2 will come up later.) Here's part 2! (sorry it took me so long and if it's too short!) "Whoa! someone's in a rampage!" Rex said. "Why do I have to choose. I love BOTH of these men! The only way I'll be able to choose is if they PROVE themselves to me." I said. "You know, that doesn't sound like a bad idea. Besides, Artemis is a bit on the weak side right now anyway." Apolo said as he looked at me with those evil eyes. "I agree. Besides, Artemis is the one woman who I would die for and she's the ONLY woman that has ever attracted me." Jeremy said. (OH BOY, this is getting pretty interesting........) (Sorry I took so long to update this! Here's the update! By the way, THIS has a R rating for battle violence!) "I knew it! You DO love Artemis after all! Well, you'll NEVER win her heart, Jeremy, because I am the strongest, fastest and the toughest vampire around here and pretty soon, you'll be dead and Artemis will be all mine. Let's face it: You're not as strong as you used to be." Apolo said. "YOU'RE the one who's weak, Apolo! You may be fast, but I'm quicker than you! I'm the hottest vampire around and Artemis admitted to me that she would rather be with me than you. Face it, Ohno: You're not the toughest one around here, I AM!" Jeremy said boldly. Hours have passed and the battle royale raged on and on until Jeremy pulls out his diamond dagger and slit Apolo's throat and Apolo quickly pulls out his sword and slashes Jeremy's ribs in half and just when the battle couldn't get any brutal, Apolo attempted to poison Jeremy and just when he was about to, I ran across the yard and blocked him, thus making him miss. "Darn it! I missed! You'll pay for this, Artemis!" Apolo growled. (To Be Continued...................) |
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Post by jennaceeta25 on Aug 31, 2007 11:57:19 GMT -5
OOOOOOOOOOO, ;D I'm lovin the action! Wonderful writing, The Black Rose Phoenix. Can't wait for more vampire Apolo!  |
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Post by ally on Sept 1, 2007 9:51:57 GMT -5
OOOOOOOOOOO, ;D I'm lovin the action! Wonderful writing, The Black Rose Phoenix. Can't wait for more vampire Apolo! me too!! for some reason i find it attractive when apolo is a vampire lmao |
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Post by jennaceeta25 on Sept 1, 2007 10:38:17 GMT -5
OOOOOOOOOOO, ;D I'm lovin the action! Wonderful writing, The Black Rose Phoenix. Can't wait for more vampire Apolo! me too!! for some reason i find it attractive when apolo is a vampire lmao If he ever becomes an actor, he should defiently play a vampire. He has the dark hair and the dark hazel eyes...  I'm getting carried away again... 
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Post by ally on Sept 2, 2007 8:16:32 GMT -5
me too!! for some reason i find it attractive when apolo is a vampire lmao If he ever becomes an actor, he should defiently play a vampire. He has the dark hair and the dark hazel eyes... I'm getting carried away again... ooooo dont we all that would be a great role for him  |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Sept 5, 2007 10:07:42 GMT -5
I will post more of this fic in a little while, I promise.
and ally, you will be GREATLY involved in the next part of this chapter and so is Rex.
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Post by ally on Sept 6, 2007 11:41:08 GMT -5
awww thanx so much! whenever i get the chance to write my two stories (well finish them) u'll be in there along with whoever u want to be in it lol
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