Apolo & Julianne The Story

[majestic]

ohnofan - I've been reading this fic of yours since the beginning and I have really been enjoying it. I check everyday for updates!! Thanks for sharing it here.

[mellie]

Ohnofan, I just spent the entire evening reading what you've posted so far of your fanfic, and I absolutely loved it. I love that you have written this fanfic in different perspectives because it seems like ready two different stories all rolled into one. I can't wait for the next installment.

[mellie]

Ohnofan, I just read the last part you added, and I bust a gut laughing especially the last few sentences. I can't wait for the next part of this chapter. ;D

I am sorry to hear you had an illness in the family. I hope everything is okay.

[majestic]

ohnofan said:

majestic said:

ohnofan - I've been reading this fic of yours since the beginning and I have really been enjoying it. I check everyday for updates!! Thanks for sharing it here.

thanks for commenting. I'm glad you like it. Sorry I'm late in responding to your post but I've had an illness in the family and haven't been able to focus much lately.

thanks again for taking the time to leave a comment. It really helps me to continue writing.

Sorry to hear that. I never know what to say, but I do hope everything turns out alright.

And yes, I've enjoyed your story from the very beginning and do hope you continue with it. I love the different POV's, very creative...and the story has a nice, realistic flow to it. Keep it up!

[mellie]

Ohnofan this chapter was great, and it captured what it really feels like for a relationship to end when one still loves the one that is ending the relationship.

[mellie]

I loved it Ohnofan. He is claiming what is his now, and won't stand for another man to take what's his. Can't wait for the next installment.

[mellie]

Loved it Ohnofan. I didn't like how Zack treated her at the studio. I feel bad Julianne didn't get to finish her dream, but she did get to talk to Apolo. I can't wait for the next installment.

[mellie]

Ohnofan, I absolutely loved this chapter. ;D Awww, Apolo was so sweet trying to comfort her even if it upset him to hear about it. Loved reading his thoughts when he was talking to Julianne on the phone.

I don't think that I am the only one reading your fanfic because the thread has been read over two hundred times. I think I am the only one leaving comments though which makes it seem like I am the only one reading it.

[laura6]

mellie said:

I loved it Ohnofan. He is claiming what is his now, and won't stand for another man to take what's his. Can't wait for the next installment.

Thats exactly what I felt about this part!!

[mellie]

Ohnofan, I absolutely loved their "first date". ;D How sweet of Apolo to send Julianne roses and a beautiful poem. I love poems, and did you write the one in this installment?!

[mellie]

Poor Julianne! So what that Dad and Zack have money and influence because that's just in Salt Lake. Apolo has much more influence all over the place, and money to boot. Apolo defend your love with everything you have, and use your status if you have to in order to stay with Julianne.

I loved it Ohnofan, but I still want to know if you wrote that beautiful poem in the "first date" installment?!

[mellie]

Ohnofan, I just read both pov's, and loved both. Poor Julianne didn't even know that she was being controlled by Zack. Apolo's pov mentioned what they did. It was getting a little hot up in there. I like the visuals I get while reading your story because it feels like I am right there witnessing the whole thing.

[majestic]

Ohnofan - I don't comment much on the fics, but I am reading & enjoying your story...I have been since you started it. I always look forward to new chapters!

[mellie]

Ohnofan are you going to post any new parts soon? I love reading your fanfic, and I would like to keep reading it.

[jennaceeta25]

Ohnofan, I'm in love with your story! Keep up the good work!