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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 12, 2007 12:20:58 GMT -5
Ok, I'll keep going.
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Post by ally on Jun 12, 2007 12:36:11 GMT -5
hehe ok! cant wait to read more of this story!!  |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 12, 2007 12:50:17 GMT -5
"You know d**n well that Rex and I BELONG together and there is nothing you OR Apolo can do about it and if you EVER try to hurt me or Rex, you'll wish you did'nt!" Ally snapped.
"She's right, you know." Rex said.
"Alright, you win this time, Rex, but I swear me and Artemis WILL get you and Ally too!" Apolo said with an evil smile on his face.
Later that night, Me and Apolo go to a gothic nightclub and all of a sudden, Jeremy comes out of nowhere and sees me from across the room.
(to be continued......)
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Post by ally on Jun 12, 2007 12:55:24 GMT -5
ohhh suspense is building!! oh man now im scared of apolo even more... but im happy with having rex! i guess thats the way its meant to be especially because ive liked rex for almost two years already haha! i cant wait to read more  |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 13, 2007 9:23:30 GMT -5
ally, I'm about to post part 4 of the chapter and believe me, you AND Rex are definitely together in this one, but SOMEONE is plotting against Apolo. Do you know WHO it is? You'll find out soon, I promise!
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jun 13, 2007 11:09:58 GMT -5
Here's part 4 and maybe possibly the end of Chapter 4!
"Well, what do we have here? Artemis in the same nighclub as I apparently am in. I should've known that you couldn't stay away from Apolo, can you Artemis?" Jeremy said.
"Yeah, I guess so. You seem to be acting a bit strange. Is there something I need to know about you, Jeremy?" I said.
"Why would I hide something from you, Artemis? Everyone knows that you're the most attractive woman right now and all of the boys are swarming after you and no one knows why, though. I should've never left you. Besides, I'm way better than Apolo is and you still have feelings for me, I know. I can tell in your sapphire eyes, Artemis. I bet that you regret leaving me and going to this dork. If you want a real man who can protect you from evil forces, leave Apolo and come back to me." Jeremy said as his eyes turned red.
A few seconds later, Jeremy pulls me closer to him and I faint and just as I thought things couldn't get any worse, Jeremy bites my wrist and kisses me seductively.
"Your will was once strong, but now, I've weakened it and even though you're engaged to Apolo, you're still in my seductive web and trapped for all of eternity. Apolo may've won this round, but I swear I will win the war and Apolo will be at my mercy. I bid you, mon amour." Jeremy said seductively as he carefully puts me down.
Just as Jeremy left, Apolo came back to find me, lying on the ground, almost unconcicous.
"OMG, Artemis! What has that evil son of a b**** done to you? Just as I suspected, he left his mark on you and has weakened you." Apolo said as he kissed me gently, thus breaking the trance that Jeremy has put on me. I wake up in Apolo's arms.
"What the heck happened to me?" I asked.
"Jeremy has put you in a trance and has bitten you on the wrist, but luckily, I saved you from going deeper into his evil spell. As long as I'm around, NO ONE can get to you and that's a promise." Apolo said.
Several days later, me, Apolo and my fraternal twin brother Julian went with some of Apolo's friends to the Rocky Mountains on a hiking trip with my cousin Ace. Me and Apolo wanted to take a hike to Mount Phoenix on our own.
"Are you sure about this Apolo? There's snakes up there and both of you could get killed!" Shani said.
"We'll be just fine, Shani. Don't forget, we can't die, we're immortal. Poison can't easily get to us. Besides this is my chance to truly be alone with Artemis. She's the angel of my life and she's the one person I can turn to for anything and I would NEVER allow anyone to hurt her, not even Jeremy Koz can't resist flirting with her and if he EVER tries to harm her, I'll kill him." Apolo said as he looked at me with a seductive look in his deep hazel eyes.
15 minutes later, all of us parted and went in different directions, but little did we know, Rex, Ally and in a shocking surprise: Jeremy were at the top of Mount Phoenix, waiting to take Apolo down.
"Can you believe this, Ally? Your friend Artemis and Apolo are heading this way!" Rex said.
"Well obviously, they want to be alone and I think we should respect that." Ally said.
"HELL NO! Apolo is not right for her, I AM! I regret letting her go and I seriously want her back and I would do anything to get her back, even if it means oblierating Apolo to win her heart, I'll do it! She's MINE and I will not allow Apolo to have his way with her!" Jeremy snapped as his eyes turned blood red.
To Be Continued.....................
(UH-OH! Now, Apolo's in trouble!)
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Post by ally on Jun 13, 2007 12:03:24 GMT -5
oooh!! nice suspense! here ill make a deal.. because you get apolo in this one and i dont, i get apolo in my story and you can get jeremy.. only seems fair right? lol |
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Post by Artemis: Ice Queen Of NYC on Jan 21, 2008 16:08:11 GMT -5
yes.
I am thinking of posting the next chapter soon.
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Post by ally on Jan 28, 2008 19:40:50 GMT -5
sweet! cant wait to read it |
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